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Reviews for If the Crime Fits the Punishment

By : ladydeathfaerie
  • From ANON - Simone on June 30, 2003
    Wow, it got really hot and steamy where I am sitting. (okay, that might be connected with the fact that it's very hot in Germany right now and on top we just had a rainstorm --> humidity)

    Very nice chapter, exactly what Dr. Simone ordered. ;-)
    And I am jealous of the chocolate syrup.
    Since Severus thinks a spanking is in order too, I can only say: Hurry up! *winks*

    Since you wanted suggestions, here it comes:
    as I said before, I like dominant Snape (a lot!). But a lot of times he started out dominant in other fics I've read, then developed feelings and got too fast too Vanilla and mushy. I know he can develop feelings (hey, I'm a romantic at heart too), but is this a reason to turn all lovey-dovey? Especially when he ioo soo sexy when dominant.
    So I ask you to please avoid this particular "trap", unless you want to go there that is.

    I hope you don't mind me saying this, since I don't know where you want to go with this. And if I step over the line, tell me please. But I simply think that in a fic Snape can be both, dominant and in love, and pulling it off to incorporate both in a good fanfic is a special feat.

    Simone *thinks of other bribes to give to speed up the progress of the fic*
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  • From ANON - Lori on June 30, 2003
    Woo Hoo! Looks like the tables are turned now. This should be interesting!
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  • From ANON - Lori on June 29, 2003
    Oh my!! I certainly hope there will be another chapter yet today and that you don't leave us hanging for long!
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  • From ANON - Simone on June 29, 2003
    Although I'm more a fan of dominant Snape (that's what I was waiting for originally), I found this Chapter curiously sexy.
    Still, I'm looking forward to see the tables turned (I will see it, won't I?).
    As you were asking for suggestions, I'd like to see Snape spanking her. (hey, you asked)

    Simone
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  • From ANON - Simone on June 28, 2003
    Oh please, please write fast!
    I want to see him extract payment from her hide. ;-)
    And I'm looking forward to the chocolate sirup being put to good use.

    Simone
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  • From ANON - Simone on June 27, 2003
    I like how you started and I'm looking forward how this is going to continue (Snape and Bondage, mmmmmmh).
    Please don't let us wait too long.

    Here's a little bribe: *hands over a big bottle of chocolate sirup to pour over Snape*

    Simone
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  • From ANON - Lori on June 27, 2003
    Okay, people! There are enough hits on this story. Start reviewing please, or she'll leave me in the dark!

    This is getting very good. Almost felt sorry for poor Severus as he was passing out cold! LOL!
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  • From ANON - Lori on June 26, 2003
    You're off to a fabulous start. I am definitely interested in reading more of this.

    "Clown school!" LOL! Too funny!
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