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Reviews for Lust, Lies, and Betrayal

By : bcandcsmom
  • From ANON - Sherri on May 17, 2004
    I knew you wouldn't let me down! This is a great beginning. AND you left me hanging! Great Idea on the getting into peoples minds and I never thought of Ron as a cad, but it works on him well. And I LOVED the Mione nickname, you would think that by now rowling would have thought to have them with nicknames for at l one one of them. I almost thought OMG about the centaur sex, but he IS part human right? And if you think about it, Hagrid's only half human and I am not so sure that centaurs are animals more than people. Anyhow it was edgy enough without going gross. The ONLY negative thing I thought, was the typos, and I'm sure you caught them. Can you go back and change them? If you like I can edit for you so you don't have to be bothered with tedious technicalities. But the story is great, it makes sense, it's interesting, and flows well. I NEED you to keep writing. Good job.........hurry up

    Sherri
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  • From ANON - Eileen on July 13, 2003
    this is good...



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  • From ANON - SunnyDay on July 12, 2003
    I love it! So cute and perfect...and H/Hr is my favorite pairing...and it fits that Harry's used by Hermione to get back at Ron, like u said at the end of the first chapter. hope you update soon :)
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  • From ANON - TimGold on July 11, 2003
    Hope you will write more, love your fic!!!
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  • From ANON - TimGold on July 11, 2003
    God that was great!!!
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  • From ANON - chantalmalfoy on June 27, 2003
    Wow. Rage much? You'd have to have a lot of hostility built up to write that.
    Don't get me wrong. I loved it. I hope writing helps you release emotions. And
    I hope you write more because I'd love to read it.
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