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Reviews for A Delicate Obsession

By : Avrild
  • From ANON - Ezmerelda on July 11, 2003
    OK, I'm speechless. It doesn't happen very often, so you can pat yourself on the back for this one.

    WOW.

    The bittersweet ending, with the tears and everything, it just broke my heart! Poor Hermione, she just knows he'll never love her the way he loves "Laura," and poor Severus, he thinks he's found his Tara (or the reincarnation of).

    As always, I can't wait to see how you resolve this, I hope it's not going to turn out like a Greek tragedy...

    Thanks again for writing!
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  • From shelia on July 11, 2003
    Oh so erotic and romantic. You have given me a beutiful vision and I thank you.
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  • From ANON - Karena Elizabeth on July 11, 2003
    Ohhh Okay - *whew* That was - damn my husband isn't home. *pants*

    And - you aren't going to kill Severus off are you? And what's going to happen when Severus figures out Laura is Hermione? *boggle*

    This is really good! I get giddy when it's updated! *grin*
    Karena Elizabeth
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  • From ANON - OzRatbag2 on July 11, 2003
    I'll never quite look at Dobby in quite the same way again...nasty indeed *cringe*

    This story is moving along nicely, but I do think it'll be interesting to see what happens when Severus finds out he's been duped. Should make for some interesting fights...




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  • From ANON - Demonic Angel on July 10, 2003
    Is Sev going to do research for Laura's problem to see if he can actually come up with a break through so to speak????

    Is anyone going to notice the new head gear that Dobby is sporting?

    I love the story, had to ask the questions...sorry. Keep up the excellent work.

    BB,
    The one and only Demonic Angel
    Keeper of the Belladonna and Sev's loin cloth.
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  • From ANON - Halo on July 10, 2003
    OMG! Dobby is a perverted little git! That cracked me up so bad!!!
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  • From ANON - giova on July 10, 2003
    Okay, the Dobby thing had me falling off my chair again! It was funny-disgusting as hell, but funny! I'm still really enjoying this story!
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  • From ANON - Ezmerelda on July 10, 2003
    I love what you did with the knickers, even better than my original suggestion! Poor, sweet, lonely Dobby! Of course he'd love Hermione, he's a Free Elf and she's the head of S.P.E.W. I'm still chuckling over that!

    The codicile to his will was a nice touch, I wonder if Dumbledore will attempt to find "Laura" right away, since he's so sure Severus is making a mistake...*that* would be interesting, I imagine Dumbledore would see through the glamour (or sense it, which amounts to almost the same thing.)

    I love that Severus took her to his ancestral home to reveal his dark mark. Hermione handled it well, I'm glad she slipped up and told him she loved him (or the equivalent thereof).

    Thanks for writing!
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  • From ANON - Redone on July 10, 2003
    Duh, Chapter 9 was way too short.
    I like this story very much, but I think longer chapters would make it even better, even if you con't update daily.
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  • From ANON - Karena Elizabeth on July 10, 2003
    I'm.. addicted... AARRGGHHHHH!!! Please update soon! I wan to know what happens when Severus finds out and how he finds out! *grin*

    Great chapter - ANd Dobby has a crush *HEHE*
    Karena Elizabeth
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  • From ANON - TeaRoses on July 10, 2003
    This is a great idea... I can't help fearing a sad ending when he finds out there is no Laura... but it's your story and you must end it how you wish! I really like the way you put the sex elements in without making them the whole story. And the humor elements are a big plus, I burst out laughing when Ron, Harry, and Ginny were saying "We are so screwed" in turns.
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  • From ANON - Ezmerelda on July 09, 2003
    The Maidenhead that wouldn't break. Sounds the the title to a B movie.

    If Hermione was a guy, I'd say she certainly had balls to do that right there, in his classroom, with him sitting there not a metre away. dn'dn't it be funny if her knickers fell out of her pocket and Snape found them? Hee Hee Hee. Feel free to use that, if you want, and have a place for it. It would definitely be worth a laugh or two, not to mention adding some tension to the plot. ::shrugs:: O'course, if it doesn't fit, it doesn't fit. I won't be hurt or offended if you choose not to use it, for whatever reason.

    Thanks for writing!
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  • From on July 09, 2003
    I don't have much time right now as I am in very serious need of a cold shower. I think that should say it all, but in case you need more encouragement to write more, I will tell you this: this chapter was hot, and I can hardly wait to read the next chapter!

    Love,

    Adora
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  • From ANON - JenBachand on July 09, 2003
    Another great chapter. I'm excited to see the memories. Looking forward to the update.

    Jen :)
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  • From ANON - Karena Elizabeth on July 09, 2003
    Anytime you have something like that in your mind, please feel free to share it againIN* IN* That was wicked good smut. Just excellent! WHat a great way to wake up in the morning!

    Thanks and update soonarenarena ELizabeth
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