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Reviews for A Delicate Obsession

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  • From ANON - potionsgurl on July 27, 2003

    Great! The last chapter was great :). I especially liked Snape's most charming/scariest smile yet. Had a good laugh over that. :)
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  • From ANON - TeaRoses on July 27, 2003
    Wow, that was so moving... Actually I am up for an Epilogue, but that's your decision. That was an incredibly moving scene the way they made love and he accepted her as she was, not only that she wasn't Laura but that she is now disabled. (I mean, hopefully she can recover but so many people are afraid to associate the disabled and sex, so I thought that was an excellent scene). Hope I didn't say anything weird there... loved this so much.
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  • From ANON - Katharina on July 27, 2003
    What can I say? You are wonderous. An Epilogue would be nice. I like to keep things tidy. ;o)
    As a total summary of "A Delicate Obsession", I have to say that it was damn good. Well written, and well thought out. Sometimes I was a bit confused, but it was always explained (or I reread it to make sure I hadn't misunderstood), so I came out of it well. You're a good author, and I know you try awfully hard. The effort paid off, and this wound being very, very good. I appreciate the fact that you listened and actually took tips or ideas from your reviewers. That's part of why we're here and there are too many authors that take us for granted, or whine about reviews for shoddy work in their writing. You never disappointed. So thank you, AprilGrey. You made this story definitely worth continuing and rereading. I'm absolutely going to read "The Hunt for Hermione." :o)
    Much love and best wishes,
    ~Kate~
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  • From ANON - Halo on July 27, 2003
    Epilogue? How about a sequel!!!
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  • From ANON - crissy on July 26, 2003
    that was too swee lov loved it. an epilogue would be icing on a very good cake. i'm thinking chocolate fudge icing on a three layer chocolate fudge pudding cake. yummm!

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  • From ANON - Saphiria on July 26, 2003
    Schniff. Normally, I don't particularly like happy endings, but since the hour is late (03.11) I'm getting all mushy and sad.
    Yea Gods Percy's being quite 'cool'.
    Boo Gods Sirius is such a bad-ass. Heh heh.
    Yea Gods Snape & Hermione end up together.
    Boo Gods Snape is fictional and I won't be able to add him to my *ahem* 'private collection'.

    Lovely. Really enjoyed this fic and will go to ff.net to read 'The Hunt'. Happy writing and readings to you for future's sake. :)


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  • From ANON - jo on July 26, 2003
    Hullo! I've actually been following your story since its inception, and just been too lazy to review. In my own pitiful defense, I'd just like to say that you didn't seem to need my help and support or any correction in grammar, spelling, or canon-correctness. But when I found myself checking twice in one day to see if you'd updated yet, I knew I had to break my silence and leave a review. *Blushes* Yes, I checked twice today, and that was *ahem* after I'd already read your update. I think I might need help....maybe in the form of the next chapter? Please? I'll give you a cookie!!!! *Frantically waves a bag of Keebler's uber-fudgey cookies*
    -jo

    10 minutes later.....

    WHAT DO YOU MEAN YOU HAVEN'T UPDATED YET!!!!!!!!! *Takes deeeeeeeeep breaths, trying to control herself....then gives up and begins ranting at the computer and the author fatefate in general until a bunch of men in white coats show up and put her in restraints*

    Dude in White Coat: Ok jo, we told not not to read anymore fanfiction during your computer time, you know that it just sets your therapy back.

    jo: *screaming* UPDATE DAMMIT, DON'T LET THEM DO THIS TO ME!!! HELP ME SNAPE!!!! LAURA NEEDS YOU!!!!!!

    Dude in White Coat: *sigh* There's no help for her when she's like this. Sedate her and put her in restraints. I don't want her hyperventilating on my watch.

    jo: *still screaming* CAN'T YOU SEE WHAT YOU'VE REDUCED ME TO??!!! I NEED SUSTENANCE!!!! I NEED SMUT!!! I NEED ANGST!!!! I NEED ANOTHER - *stops screaming and looks at the IV in bewilderment* oh, that feels tingly, what'd y'all use this.....*passes out*


    Can she be saved by the immediate production and posting of another chapter? Only time will tell.........TBC!
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  • From ANON - Karen on July 26, 2003
    Ooh, neat chapter... we're finally getting down and dirty (^_^). I love the description of Bechard and what he did to Melanie.

    Karen
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  • From ANON - MoD on July 25, 2003
    Wow, Very dark. Can't wait for more. This Chapter I greedly gobbled up so make the next one loooonnnngggeerrrr.(smiles)
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  • From ANON - Halo on July 25, 2003
    I'm so excited about the end. You've done a wonderful job!
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  • From on July 25, 2003
    hey! Wow, it's getting really good now. Although, I did find the whole demon thing creepy. But All's well that ends well, and I'm glad Sev's back on his feet. Now I get to wait for her to tell him she's Laura. *Very evil grin...*
    Thanks,
    ~Kate~
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  • From ANON - Kiristeen on July 25, 2003
    yay!! Severus is back! : )~ Now he can get on with sorting out his confusing life. I hope Hermione is okay!

    Kiri
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  • From ANON - Adora on July 25, 2003
    Oh No! Now I have to wait for at least two weks to read the last chapter:( I'll be going to France tomorrow and won't be back until August 10th. I can't wait to read the last chapter, so I'll try to get to an Internetcafe in France, but I'm not sure if I'll be able to persuade all my friends :-( Anyway, I totally loved the story so far. I read the last three or four chapters in one go now, and I've been breathless. I can't wait to read the last chapter, so good work! Love, Adora
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  • From ANON - Lady Aidil on July 25, 2003
    You still surprise me with new ideas and very exciting plots-this story of Severus` family is quite original,I suppose,have never met the similar one and appreciate it as well as the main plot with Hermiona`s second identity yet I can`t stand waiting for the moment when Snape will fully realize what role Hermiona has played in his life.
    I`mostmost dying of curiosity!You are GREAT!Asking for more-regards L.A.
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  • From ANON - Ezmerelda on July 25, 2003
    Very interesting! So Snape's got his mother's body lying in state somewhere? His family history just gets wierder and wierder, although I guess we should all be thankful that his motherdarkdark magic saved him from certain death at Voldemort's hand.

    Thanks for writing, your story has stayed strong and true, all along, and I am the the ending will be just as well-written!

    Thanks again for your update notices!

    Ez
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