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Reviews for Troubled Love

By : Cherish
  • From Jicky on August 23, 2006
    (sorry i'm gona hafta keep my review short, gettin ver sleepy) i'm really glad i caught sight of this fic and started reading! the funny momemts are good but too rare. so many sad moments, i prefer those of angst. i see some typos which make the reading very rough. i'm happy with how you've Draco, but Harry seems a bit (too) OOC (for a fanfic of cuz) i wish Lucius would see they're in love and stop being such a moron. (or lock him up in Azkaban n be done with GRR) i hope Draco won't suffer bad treatment from the general public or most of the Slytherins, since Harry gets it enuf already! (gods i hate discrimination) anyway, i'm looking forward to the rest of this story, keep up the good work~
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  • From ANON - Poison on August 13, 2006
    this is a good fic, i really want to see more of it.
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  • From ANON - Aeolua on August 10, 2006
    OMG!!**passes Out** I LOVE the plotline that you have going. And I apologize for any mistypes that I seem to be making, its about 5:30am here in Texas and I havent been to bed yet!! ^.~
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  • From ANON - missianne on July 28, 2006
    This fic is awesome. I wish you hadn't abandoned it!
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  • From ANON - evalhanne on July 23, 2006
    This is an interesting story, I can't wait to read more!
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  • From ANON - like hell i'm gonna tell you on December 19, 2005
    I can't possibly believe you wasted time and bandwith by posting this stinking pile of crap. An incident in Potion? OK, I'll buy that. No one at Hogwarts is able to mend a sexchange? Okay - though my suspension of of incredulity just pulled a muscle from overstretching. Harry gay? Well -whatever rocks your boat.
    But HOT SEXY DRACO MALFOY IMMEDIATELY PUTTING ASIDE HIS RACIST SLUR AND START BEING NICE just because Harry's penis is removed from the scene? Go jump in a cement mixer.
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  • From Silverwolf21 on January 07, 2005
    Absolutly wonderful! I can't wait for you next update.
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  • From ANON - vinchildy on December 01, 2004
    I love it! the story was wonderful. Please,i want more harry/draco lovin.
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  • From ANON - May on October 10, 2004
    Here's a constructive criticism hun. You are, as you said yourself, not good in writing sex scenes at all, to be honest. For a long tslasslasher, this is trully not nearly enough of a smut. You ought to read more of that, I suggest. On the other hand, I'm hooked on the plot. There's much to be learned in writing style, likewise in spelling and grammer but the plot is, while not too original, very good. The turns and twists that every now and then you show are pretty effective. And you have captured the characterization of each characater *so* well that it is what sustains the otherwise simple story. In that account, you have made a brilliant job. Congratulations, and hope you continue with the fic. Am looking forward to further chapters!
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  • From ANON - k on July 10, 2004
    rtu
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  • From ANON - ~cry~ on June 19, 2004
    Loved this :)
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  • From ANON - shdwmstr on June 15, 2004
    whens ur next update
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  • From ANON - Yana on June 12, 2004
    when is the next chapter comin gout
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  • From ANON - Tizbd on June 12, 2004
    Hey!! I read this story for the frist time six months ago... I found it very good and re-read it, I was hoping it would have been updated by now, and I was wondering when are you going to update? I hope you do soon, and I think It'll be worth it, after all it's a very good fic. Hope you update REALLY soon, since I', desperate. *Sighs*
    PS: by the way in the sex scene on chapter 12 there is a mistake, I thought you might want to check that out. It is about Harry entering Draco, but you wrote that Draco prepared Harry, I just thought you ought to know.
    Thanks for your attention, and hope this fics keeps getting more hits.

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  • From ANON - t on June 09, 2004
    ef
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