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By : Cherish
  • From ANON - chantalmalfoy on January 11, 2004
    Poor Draco. Please don't let his father hurt him! Lucius is going to have to get over it and understand that
    Draco and Harry were meant to be together. Please update again soon. This fic is making me crazy! I have
    to know what happens!
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  • From ANON - lee marker on January 10, 2004
    I love it, but i still thank that it whould be funny to come up with a reason that herry had to go back to being a girl to have the kids.
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  • From ANON - lee marker on January 09, 2004
    I love this story. I thank it whould be a good turn of evnts if you came up with a reason to make harry have to change back in to a girl to keep the child.

    Just a little turn that whould make it all to ironic to me.


    But grate story keep up the good work.

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  • From ANON - s*j on December 29, 2003
    fantastic chapters! love to see more chapters frm u! :D
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  • From ANON - Rocky Oberlin on December 17, 2003
    I only read bits and pieces of your story, but I think that the pregnancy idea was a good one. I'm not sure how many times Harry and Draco had sex, but there is the off chance of Harry getting pregnant with each time. Personally I think that the baby should be a girl. If you have Harry being mad at Draco through the whole pregnancy, then may be have Draco come back just as the baby is being born. They both should witness the miracle (and pain) of labor and delivery. May be then, they would get the right idea of USING PROTECTION next time. (Sorry, going into Nurse Aide mode.)
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  • From ANON - Dina on December 10, 2003
    I was intrigued by Harry's transformation into a girl, and Draco and Harry finally gng tng to express their feelings under this unusual circumstance.

    There were some lovely intimate moments between them such as the lingerie shopping, tenderness in the library, and bedroom scenes. There were also some humourous moments as Harry tried adjusting to the change. However, the writing had some serious deficiencies, which the author acknowledged. I'm not sure if English is the author's native language.

    The author mentioned getting a beta reader around chapter seven. Err, in that case, either the beta reader did an incomplete job or the author missed some corrections because I still encountered problems. The upside being the writing did show some improvements since the earlier chapters. Speaking of the earlier chapters, I would've recommended the beta get with the author and revise them asl.
    l.

    Full comments posted at http://groups.yahoo.com/group/glassesreflect/message/11529 and http://groups.yahoo.com/group/glassesreflect/message/11536

    One beta forum can be found at http://www.fictionalley.org/fictionalleypark/forums/forumdisplay.php?s=&forumid=18


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  • From ANON - biblios on December 07, 2003
    I am so loving your story
    it is nice to read a story that isnt just falling out and making up with who ever happily accepting being parents etc even though they are teens, dont lose that great realism ;)
    if you want a baby for them I always thought they would make a nice girl, blond with green eyes ;) the alouff malfoy look with the passion of the potters ;)
    ant way my ideas ;) keep wng
    ng
    lol biblios
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  • From ANON - Em on December 06, 2003
    PLEASE update! I'm in love with the story and can't wait to see what happens next. I seem to be in the minority, but I think that Harry should have a girl. It would be hilarious to see the 2 guys try to take care of a girl. Maybe Harry's brief stint as a girl would help him relate lol
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  • From ANON - spikeprop on December 05, 2003
    I totally disagree with tbe people who thought the male preg ruined the story. I think male preg stories (while strange) are awesome! And you are doing a great job of explaing how it works biologically. I really want to know what's going to happen next!
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  • From ANON - christy on December 03, 2003
    who cares if HArry is preg. this is a killer good story, and i think they should havea agirl with white hair like Draco and green eyes like Harry she should be good at placing the part of seeker be in slytherine's house but be more like Harry. cool...e amil and let me know i'll be surprised when i read it, just cause i know ahead of time doesnt mean i'll be laee surprised!!!
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  • From ANON - Hexia on December 03, 2003
    Girl! I love your story and its a fine idea with the pregnacy.
    I actually laghed quite a bit over this chapter, so I think you should up date soon...
    Keep up the good spirit!
    Love
    Hexia
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  • From ANON - Jaimi on December 03, 2003
    ok first thing first.... LOVE THE STORY *giggle* and making harry preggers is what you wanted right sooooo good on ya. i mean unfortunately many of the authors are afraid to write what they want because of assholes with small minds. your story is just that YOUR story. i would like to thank you for of course sharing it with all of us. and those of us who have of course fallen in love with it will read it to it's end and then make the descision of whether or not is was done well at that point in time. i lik the way you did it too. you didn't bring it up until the transion. you introduced girl harry with her(his) own problems and led us through that with no added overload. now that harry is boy harryi would have to admit just him pining over draco seemed rather bland but now we have a new scenerio of trouble starting predictaments. i ahve to admit you did this beautifully. stay true to your muse and self and continue to write your story as you see it should go. and personally a boy would be wonderful ( a little draco/harry look alike running around calling harry mommy is to damn cute) just go with our gut and i am sure that the more adult readers who simply like the story will continue to read. good luck and please please update soon
    Sincerely and with best wishes, Jaimi
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  • From ANON - shaolin on December 03, 2003
    yeah...i like it! keep updating! Oh yeah...i
    want to see them have a boy with Malfoy
    hair, and Potter eyes...lol
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  • From ANON - chantalmalfoy on December 02, 2003
    I can't remember when I reviewed last so here goes...
    I think they should have a boy (an heir). I love that Harry is pregnant!
    It didn't ruin the story. Actually I was expecting it. I don't like Harry
    being mad at Draco, so please hurry with the next chapter and make it better.
    Is Draoingoing to take Harry to look at the castle now that he's a boy?
    I bet he can see it clearly now.
    Please update very soon.

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  • From ANON - Ice Lupus on December 02, 2003
    I know one thing: I love it! BOY!
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