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Reviews for The Foray Into Insanity

By : JadeRhiannon
  • From lightinmyeyes80 on March 22, 2008
    This has started out looking great!
    It has so much potential to be hilarious and sweet at the same time.
    Please continue!
    I'm begging!
    I'll even keep watch over your muses to make sure they dont escape!
    PLEEEEEAAAAASSSSSSSEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - musegurl18 on July 01, 2003
    I think this could be interesting but i dont know there was not enough to even get a plot line. A bit of advice from a fellow aurthor (I write on fanfiction.net) in your first chapter estah thh the plot with that little writing many wont go on to read other chapters. Others will be confused. Pluse this subject has been done over manyes, es, so to keep ppls attion you have t itt it hard in the first chapter or agian they loes intrest. Also i dont think its fair to put one pharagrah up and call it a chapter. That was more of a preview than a chapter. I think the story has potentil but there was not much to go on. ITs usaly good to have a 500 hundred word minimum as a chapter basis especialy for the first chapters because they explain the story line. I am not saying that its bad i am just trying to give some helpful critisism. Hope u continue with the story.

    ~muse
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  • From ANON - mikochef22 on July 01, 2003
    I liked this, very short, need more, LOTS MORE, the muse chat at the end is amusing too. Thank You Very Much ;)
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