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Reviews for Slytherin & Gold

By : GlindaTrisstt
  • From ANON - jenn on July 30, 2003
    What a great story!! I think this is one of the best that I have read here. The story is beautifully written and the character dialouge is outstanding. Don't get discouraged by the amount of reviews. I think that sometimes people just enjoy the reading and dont think about the author's need to know what they thought. I think it is absolutly wonderful. And about your concern over the lenght of the chapters, don't shorten them. I love to read chapters with substance. Short little piddley chapters just dont do it for me, or alot of readers. Please finish this story. I cannot wait to see how it all turns out!
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  • From RickyRoo on July 30, 2003
    This is incredible! The dream interpretation is very well done, although I think you repeated yourself a bit too much when switching points of view. A new point of view should introduce a new personal interpretaiton, but that's just me. I'm loving this story.
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 27, 2003
    I enjoyed this story. I like the idea of Viviane being a Nymph and having those powers.

    I would have enjoyed it even more, though, if you learned the difference between "your" and "you're" and how to spell "definitely." Please get a beta reader!
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  • From ANON - GadoTheLion on July 26, 2003
    nice chapter i cant wait to read more i think i am starting to get the feel that hogwarts is all about the sex though....................... KICK ASS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    Best Wish's,
    Gado The Lion Almighty
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  • From ANON - Yanna on July 25, 2003
    Excellent. First rate. Good lord, I don't think I have enough kind words in my vocabulary for this story. Beautiful... Love, danger, romance, all of it. Love this story!!!
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  • From ANON - Yanna on July 25, 2003
    Excellent. First rate. Good lord, I don't think I have enough kind words in my vocabulary for this story. Beautiful... Love, danger, romance, all of it. Love this stor Yan
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  • From ANON - C.G. on July 22, 2003
    Another thing I love about this story is the detail and the time taken. It doesn't rush through things. It gives time appropriate and detail that makes it seem more real.

    -C.G.
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  • From ANON - C.G. on July 22, 2003
    This has been the absolute best fan fiction I have ever read. I love the use of language most of all. It's something about the way it's written that makes it like a beautiful portrait is being painted before me. Please keep writing!!! Thank you for what you already have done!!!

    -C.G.
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  • From ANON - GadoTheLion on July 19, 2003
    well on the most part i thought that this story well............ how should i put this............ oh hell only one way i know of to put it....... KICK ASS! now i know i am new to this whole thing but for the most part i think that this is a well written story now of course there are some things in this story i dont like but i dont really like nymph's (had a bad run in with one in D&D, yes i know i am a rambling) anywho...... great job keep the chapters coming my eyes sparkle with anticapation...........

    Best Wishes,
    Gado The Lion Almighty
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  • From ANON - Rei on July 14, 2003
    Oooh..it justps gps getting better!
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  • From ANON - Rose on July 14, 2003
    Grossio, Harry? yuk yuk.
    Its still a good story though.
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  • From ANON - lasair on July 13, 2003
    This is one of the best saga's on the site, and i'd like to point out that i'm very very choosy/fussy about which saga's i read and reveiw.
    Keep up the good work and i can't wait for the next installment.
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  • From ANON - Gypsy on July 13, 2003
    A very nice chapter.
    It definately puts a good twist to the story her being Nymph.
    Quick Question for you....
    If Sev and the others are going so far as to ask Sirius for Protection for his three beloveds, I'm surprised he didn't 'bite the bullet' and Call for Remus as well, there HAS to be some way for them to explain the werewolf's presence there at Hogwarts.
    That way you'd have three fourths of the Mauraders there for protection (Harry being James' Proxy).
    Very good so far.. are you going to have Draco become a sweetheart or is he still to be a prat? Personally I'm hoping for the former.
    I hope that Sirius, Viviane, and maybe even Sev, would tell Harry about his family, as I stated before he has little to no knowledge of them except the tad tidbits others have told him and the derogatory remarks made by that pitiful excuse for an aunt of his.
    I hope you update this story soon.

    Gypsy.
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  • From ANON - Gypsy on July 12, 2003
    I've read this from beginning to chapter 5, and I have to say I'm definately intrigued.
    What exactally is she? How can she calm animals so well.
    I dearly hope you have her tell Harry much more about his parents and such since not very many stories have their characters tell him very much, to me I would think he would try to get as much information as he could seeing as how inquisitive he actually is.
    I hope you post chapter 6 and beyond soon.
    I've enjoyed what I've read so far and await for more.

    Gypsy.
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