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Reviews for Slytherin & Gold

By : GlindaTrisstt
  • From ANON - Sunny on September 13, 2007
    Hi!
    You said in the last chapter that you plan to go on with this fic. But it is a long time since you uploaded a story or chapter her. I hope you are still writing and that some day you will add new chapters to this story. I really love this story. So if you ever upload a new chapter please inform me. Bye Sunny
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  • From ANON - amelia on October 26, 2005
    please finish this story

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  • From ANON - Addie on March 08, 2005
    I've really been enjoying your story Slytherin & Gold. Your writing style and characterization is excellent.
    I hope to see more chapters soon.
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  • From ANON - Jennifer_Cairns on January 07, 2005
    Ok- Every time I read a new story of yours I say Oh Oh- THIS is my new favorite.... PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE update! This is my fav Ss/OC pairing yet! And I need to find out what happens to the babies.. and Harry... and the Remus and the new teacher!
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  • From ANON - cantatrix on January 05, 2005
    I am so sorry for your loss. Real life has a way of sneaking into fiction, doesn't it. I hope you are well or at least, pointing in that direction.
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  • From ANON - cantatrix on January 05, 2005
    Still liking the story a lot. The bit about the chaste tree was well researched. I know a bit about herbology, as it were, and real information (where possible) really adds to the story's credibility. Small criticism: there are a huge number of typos and a smaller, but noticeable, number of errors in grammar or form. I know you said one of the later chapters was un-beta'd but still... Please don't be offended. I really like the story (which is why I've gotten this far) but reading copy with mistakes like that make my left brain want to seize ;)
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  • From ANON - cantatrix on January 02, 2005
    Hello,

    Sorry it's taken me so long to get over here from Occlumency. Thanks for the link to the story here. You know I love it, especially now that Remus is more involved. What is it about Sev and Mooney that make the girls so wild?!
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  • From ANON - Katie on December 12, 2003
    Holy Shit! KEEP ON WRITING! I DEMAND IT! Please...?

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  • From ANON - Mickey on September 16, 2004
    Hi, just finished reading all the chapters. It's a good storyline, and as with your other stories, I do like your original characters.

    I'm really glad you dropped the narrative repetition through alternate viewpoints that you'd done in the first few chapters. It was distracting, and detracted from the quality of the story. Truly, unless you're doing something highly Rashomon-esque, where the course of the action changes substantially depending on who's telling the story, it's just unnecessary. In general, if you ever do a serious rewrite on this story, I would just go from a third-person neutral standpoint, and let the narrative guide the reader to determine who's in the action at the moment. Section headings with the POV character are superfluous to a werittritten story.

    This one's not as good as The Rules of Engagement, but it's a very likeable story.
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  • From ANON - Joanna Scarlett on May 16, 2004
    Great story so far Glinda, can't wait to see what happens!
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  • From ANON - Kathy on April 02, 2004
    Well, I must say you've done it again. So many wonderful stories, it's no wonder you can't update them all as much as I'd like for you to. I really like this Snape by the way. Some may think he's out of character, but not me. Love has a way of completely changing a person and I like it a lot! This is a great story...Please don't give up on it.

    Kathy
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  • From ANON - Amanda (hcbroncochick) on March 31, 2004
    oh my gosh.. I'm so sorry to hear about the death of your father. I know what it's like to lose someone dear. I hope you begin updating again soon, but I understand if you don't. Take care.
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  • From ANON - Amanda (hcbroncochick) on March 31, 2004
    Nooo please don't quite writing the story!! I'm almost on the last chapter and I'm gonna start going into withdraw if I can't read the rest of it. lol. PLEASE PLEASE write more. lol. I really want to see Remus and Harry find love.. they deserve it. :) GOOD LUCK with the writing.
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  • From ANON - Amanda (hcbroncochick) on March 31, 2004
    WOW!! I know that I'm a bit behind reading this, as I'm only on.... hmm... good question, lol, forgot what chapter I'm on. But anyway, I just have to say that this was a WONDERFUL chapter. I particuarly (it's late, sorry about the spelling) loved the part where Remus was dancing with Vivaine (sp?) and said that it'd be easy for Snape to kill him 'oh, sorry, didn't mean to kill the wolf'.. for some reason that struck me as funny. Then when Hermoine and Snape were dancing and he said that he was glad she was an insufferable know it all. :) Aww I see Snapey's acutally got a heart. I just wanted to say that I love the story!!!
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  • From ANON - Candace Jensen on January 20, 2004
    Oh my goodness!! You're story is so awesome. I love it because it actually has a plot and isnt all just a bunch of sex and stuff. You add just enough sex to add to the story, but not too much to make it overwhelming. I think you are very skilled at writing and am looking forward to the next chapter... PLEASE CONTINUE BECAUSE I LOVE IT!!!!!! SeNdInG bEsT rEg, Ca, CaNdAce!
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