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Reviews for When Time Stands Still

By : SantiMonreal
  • From ANON - steph on August 20, 2003
    hey! this was a short chapter, but i liked it! I feel so sorry for Ron...but harry seems to fancy hermione quite a bit. now time for some hanky panky!!! p.s. you're a great writer (even though i've probably told you that a thousand times.)
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  • From ANON - Macy Gray on August 18, 2003
    You poor author. Midterms stink...or at least mine do. Anyway, good chapter. Harry mooning over Hermione, Hermione mooning over Harry and Ron. And Ron all confused. Aw! I am a hopeless romantic and though this is an ODD romance (threesome) I think it's sweet. ^^
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  • From ANON - Andrian on August 18, 2003
    So glad to see this lovely story updated. The detail and nuances are wonul aul and I felt so badly for Ron. Good luck with the midterms.
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  • From ANON - ShyHi on August 14, 2003
    this story is great update it!!!
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  • From ANON - Jerome on August 07, 2003
    Wow! You are getting preety good! I read your first fic a few weeks ago and this one is alot better! When are you going to update?!! Soon?
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 06, 2003
    dfgh
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  • From ANON - Milkshake on August 04, 2003
    I thought this chapter explained alot thanks for writeing me back it really shows that you appriciate your readers and i like that also please keep wing ing i love this story!!!!!!!!!

    again i really do like how you write back to people!


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  • From ANON - Sliver on August 03, 2003
    Santi,

    This chapter was funny! At least I think it is. It is also wierd, to some extent. Are you going to get them together in the next chapter? I can't wait to find out. Update soon!
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  • From ANON - Andrian on August 01, 2003
    You have made me blush with that comment to myself (red cheeks) but thank you!

    You worried about your story being too smutty, not in the least bit! Smut (aka a touch of porn and/or sexual relations) sometimes takes on a meaning that is not very complimentary. Do not get me wrong I love a good smutty romp, however your story is so touching, exploring the desires of these three young people with reality and magic. Though I may sense a bit more coming in the area of the exploration to the point of mayhaps consumation I do not equate it with smut, but with natural, sweet coming of age.

    Excellent.
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  • From ANON - HPfreak18 on July 31, 2003
    Sorry I haven't reviewed, I have been gone so no internet for me. Great job on the last two chapters and I am looking foward to the next!
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  • From ANON - Odessa on July 31, 2003
    this was a pretty good chapter and i can't wait for more, but don't drop your classes unless your positive you will fail them otherwise. Its a big waste of money and if its just because they are suckie I tell ya they're just going to suck more in a long semester. I'm taking a completely pointless class right now, and it suck; it would horrible to have to take it for 16 weeks instead of five.
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  • From ANON - steph on July 31, 2003
    i like this chapter in the fact that they are very real-feeling situations...hermione's feelings toward the lust spell seamed very real indeed.
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  • From ANON - Macy Gray on July 31, 2003
    Who'd ever thought a threesome fanfic would strangely romantic? Now the Grangers are asking about Harry? Is Harry going to to stay with the Granger's for the summer? Oh, please say yes!! ^^
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  • From ANON - Roxane on July 31, 2003
    Weird chapter indeed, but necessary to the plot. While your story is obviously a threesome, I've noticed that there are onlyry/Hermione and Ron/Hermione moments. I was wondering if there would be any Ron/Harry moments. I mean, I know they don't believe themselves to be gay, but they still love each other, so it would add some depth to the relationship. But if you're not comfortable writing slash, by all means, don't. Keep up the wonderful work! Cheers!
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  • From ANON - steph on July 28, 2003
    p.s. sorry for calling you a girl
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