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Reviews for When Time Stands Still

By : SantiMonreal
  • From ANON - Macy Gray on July 12, 2003
    Aw, Ron's in love...as twisted is it all is. I kid. I loved how he kept going on about Hermione. Just how much is he going to tell Ginny. Now let's have Harry's thought! Good stuff.
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  • From ANON - Sliver on July 10, 2003
    This story has given me new insight to the world of erotica with plot. I think that this is one of the better ones that were posted here after a while, not with all the rush of new members posting not so good scrapwork they call literature. If anyone out there is hurt, by my words, I can't help it, I speak only from what i see, and that is what i saw and read. Good luck to you Santi, I your story is a lot better than most. Update soon, I don't like waiting. I mean it! I don't mean to be mean, I am just straightforward and frank.
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  • From ANON - Archchancellor on July 09, 2003
    Two things.

    1, A very good chapter. I like your style.
    2, Get a beta. This chapter need needs major formatting.
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  • From ANON - Jennifer on July 09, 2003
    This chapter was er ier in terms of spelling, but there were still a few errors. The story seems to be getting iguinguing, too. Don't rush the smut, focus on the plot and the amour will follow. Good luck!
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  • From tdg on July 09, 2003
    Wow, really interesting plot and writing. I'm impressed. A lemon with a plot? Shocking but good. Waiting to see how this could possible work out between the three of them. That will be interesting!
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  • From ANON - Roxane on July 09, 2003
    The concept of your story is very interesting, I looks forward to the next chapters. One thing you could do is try to organise the text more clearly, with spaces and such. It would be easier to read and follow. Check out for the typos, and everything will be perfect. Cheers!
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  • From ANON - Macy Gray on July 09, 2003
    Macy here again to say excnt! nt! I love a fic with an actual plot. Smut aside, though we all love it, this is really well written. Since I'm a fickle reader who loves H/Hr & Hr/R fics, this has both. Can't wait to read more.
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  • From ANON - Macy Gray on July 08, 2003
    Threesome? I don't know why but I'm more interested now. ^_^ Seriously, I liked this first chapter. Update soon.
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  • From ANON - Jennifer on July 07, 2003
    Hi there, there are some great trio (h/r/h) sources out there as I'm a fan also. Check out fictionalley's scusa boards and look for the HMS Menage a trio; also there is a yahoogroup called Menage a trio (You'll need to subscribe to the group and it does require you are 18). Just be wary of the yahoo group, it can get a little explicit sometimes. Perhaps you should just start out with the fictionalley board. Email me if you're having trouble finding it. Also, yes, there were a few typos, so it would be good to get a beta. I'd be happy to help as I beta a couple of other authors. Otherwise, your story was very sweet, I'm looking forward to reading more!
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  • From ANON - Archchancellor on July 07, 2003
    Excellent.
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  • From ANON - Ry on July 07, 2003
    A nice story, i want to read more
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