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Reviews for This Subdued Fire

By : gammiepie
  • From ANON - Ashley on August 01, 2003
    I really love this fic. It's so engaging and I'm glad that Hermione finally learned the truth. I'm also glad they didn't just jump back into bed with one another.
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  • From ANON - dianna on August 01, 2003
    it good very good. continue the good work.
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  • From ANON - Croft on August 01, 2003
    The two new chapters (22 + 23) were, not surprisingly, brilliant. Hermione's small revenge/prank was quite original and very unexpected, the fencing was fabulous and the making up was even better:

    She took a deep breath. "You're forgiven. Now get to work."

    Dracoled,led, hearing the smile in her voice. He felt better than he had in a very long time.

    *squee* Bloody fantastic! Can't wait to read the next chapters.
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  • From ANON - Crystalline Lily on August 01, 2003
    Awww...they're back together again! That's definitely a good thing. Well, I don't have much more to say. Though I would like it if you update soon, but you're pretty good at that already, so I guess I can't tell you to update any faster.

    Til next time, then!

    ~C Lily~
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  • From ANON - Crystalline Lily on August 01, 2003
    you got the "I'm not right handed" thing from the Princess Bride, didn't you?

    Oh, I tried reviewing this fic before. Just yesterday, in fact, but my computer crashed, so I decided not to retype my long one again. So, I'll just sum it up.

    what's going to happen on beltane? Voldemort and Draco have something planned, and Dumbledore and Snape know about it, don't they?

    And what's the prophecy? I think it has something to do with Hermione and Draco getting together, because I remember Dumbledore said that if Hermione knew about it, she would go back to Draco under false affectiowhicwhich could lead to disaster, or something of the sort. So, it's probably one of those, Hermione and Draco get together, and then it's all happy. But that's not right. It wouldn't go with this fic very well...

    But, I'll go read the next chapter now. Maybe it'll have some clues.

    ~C Lily~
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  • From ANON - Draco_Fan on August 01, 2003
    OMG... I absolutely love this story!!!! I read all of it again last night and i just can't get enough of it. I hope you udpate soon... It's august first and i'm gonna check everyday to see if you've updated... That's how much i like this story!
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  • From ANON - Gin on August 01, 2003
    jesus christ- sword fighting is so hot.
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  • From ANON - VampireHunter278 on August 01, 2003
    YAY!!!! THEY GOT BACK TOGETHER!!!! I'M SO HAPPY!!! YOU MUST CONTINUE!
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  • From ANON - Tabata on August 01, 2003
    Wohoo, they are back together, sort of. I choose a good way to bring them back together. And it
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  • From ANON - shadow on August 01, 2003
    *squeals and dances* YES! you have no idea how happy i was to come home and find TWO chapters! i'm so excited! i've been having such a good day, and this just topped it! i can't wait until your next update, because i really like your writing style. you don't overly excess with the "swear words", and i think that is important, but when you use them, you use them in the right places. thank you.
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  • From ANON - Raphaelle on July 31, 2003
    Wow!
    I just discovered your amazing story . . . and I must say, I absolutely LOVE what you have done with the classic D/Hr plotline. It's been used so much that by now reading a D/Hr story (even though ip Dip D/Hr, among others) just gets old usually. But you have done a wonderful job of making it real and keeping it interesting, what with developments like Hermione's parents' death and Harry's magehood popping up. Keep that up, it'll keep the story going. :) What I like most is how real your characters are; cookie-cutters they ain't. ow yow you probably got criticism for Hermione's behavior after her parents' death, but I say kudos to you for making her go through all of that. The violent manner of their death, and her sense of betrayal and loss of security, makes her subsequent actions completely understandable. I'm glad, though, that the poor girl's finally getting back tvingving like a human being! One thing I would suggest: besides recovering from the shock and playing tricks on Draco, Hermione's really done nothing in response to her parents' death. It seems to me that she'd be the kind of person who would take some radical course of action to either get revenge or closure . . . maybe trying to construct some grand plan for Voldemort's demise, or confronting Draco directly, or simply training herself in DADA more. I mean, look at what she did after finding out Hogwarts had house-elves: she started a frickin' society! Also, right now I know she's feeling a lot of anger about Draco and his betrayal, but soon it might make sense to move her more towards sadness, disdain, or regret; Hermione's a logical person in general, and would probably figure out that her and Draco's back-and-forth pranks are a waste of her time, and in the end a pretty trivial means of expressing the depths of her anger. You might have a plan for this sort of reaction; in which case, far be it from me to influence your deviatirom rom what you intend, since I've loved your writing thus far. Well, thanks so much for the story and please keep writing!
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  • From ANON - Zahrah on July 31, 2003
    Really good Chapter. You really update soon. Thats great we don't have to wait to lomg. Go on writing like this. : )
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  • From ANON - ee on July 31, 2003
    So much in depth infoion ion with Snape. Hermione only brings up reminders of his past, right? He's not going to start liking her, is he? If he does, I could see it happening.
    Where's Draco? I can't wait for him to go back to Hogswart. She is gonna make his life MISERABLE. Since he misses her so much, I wonder if he will want her more after he sees her again. Please update very soon:)
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  • From ANON - dianna on July 31, 2003
    it's a good story. you are a excellent writer. i really hope herminie and darco end up together. please e mail when you up date at girlygirlboxer@cs.com
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  • From ANON - Rebecca on July 30, 2003
    Wow. This is one of the best Draco/Hermione fics I've ever read. You're a great writer; I can't wait for more! :D
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