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Reviews for This Subdued Fire

By : gammiepie
  • From ANON - sue on July 16, 2003
    wonderful! Can't wait for the rest!
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  • From ANON - Jez on July 14, 2003
    I really love the way your story is going and i can't wait to find out what is going to happen between Hermione and Draco. Please write more soon.
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  • From ANON - Croft on July 14, 2003
    Wonderful story, and the updates are almost overwhelming. Not that I'm complaining, mind you, it's just very unusual. Love the interaction between Draco and Hermione; the 'relationship' (in lack of a better word) progresses in a plausible manner and the banter is brilliant. And it's also nice to read a story where it's not necessarily a good thing to have great powers, indeed, they seem to cause a great deal of grief. I'm currently torn between wanting Draco and Hermione back together again, and sympathizing with Hermione's hatred towards the man who (unwillingly) betrayed her secret with disastrous results. Oh, and hopefully we'll see more of Grandpapa - finally a likeable OC, and even though I don't understand most of it, I'm rather fond of the French parts. You make it seem very natural. Finally, I think I'll repeat myself and say; wonderful story.
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  • From ANON - JadedAdvocate on July 14, 2003
    I TOTALLY LOVE THIS FIC! it is so well written, only a few errors from ur story to the book, but i still LOVE it! keep updating quickly, i really really am enjoy this fic, i can relate to so many feelings that Hermione is facing, the struggle with her love and broken tryst and is turning to other ways to punish herself for being so fool hardy. plz continue with this fic, it is excelent
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 13, 2003
    Chapter 9~
    Really Great Story!! I have really enjoyed reading your story today! You are a very talented writer! Easy to read! Great plot and story line! Not just sex, sex, sex ... but, the sex is GREAT! You have really captured their emotions true to form! I like Draco trying to be evil in the beginning and slowing coming around to respect Hermione for her intellect, her magical superiority and her sexual prowess. I like how you are keeping Hermione a "strong" witch over Draco's advances and not becoming a "pansy".

    I'm glad to see that you have included a lot of *magic* into this story! With their magic abilities of being both Mage and being able to become invisible is a "good thing" when trying to find a "neutral territory"! Sweet little love butterflies. Veracitas, Engorgio, Alohomora, Reducio, Sonorus, Polyjuice Potion, Gratificare, Invisibilis, Revelatio, ... all great use of magic spells to enhance this story!

    Your humour really comes through your writing too! "... when he sent a quill over to her to write back and forth, she picked it up and snapped it in half." Snape in a skirt! "Please don't let Millicent and Goyle procreate. Those would be the ugliest children on the planet." "I had to pull a Bond to get it back."

    And the sexual one liners are AWESOME! "You... started ... this. Now finish it." "Well, then. Seduce me." "You may not be able to do this, but I am." "Someone's in a naughty mood. Hmmm... you really think?"

    Keep up the great work and looking forward to more chapters! Thanks for updating so fast and so muc onc once!

    ** The Wishful Witch **
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  • From ANON - Draco_Fan on July 13, 2003
    *Evil Grin* Malfoy is so bad and it's so obvious that he likes her but Hermione is so stubborn that she doesn't realize it, or she does realize it or doesn't want to believe it because it IS Malfoy... of course... who wouldn't want that?! Hehe... Update soon please!
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  • From ANON - Fiery Slut on July 12, 2003
    Congratulations on this very well written and sexy fic!
    I have an obsession w/ Draco/Hermione because of the underlying sexual tension between them!
    Your sex scenes got me really hot and bothered
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  • From ANON - cuttie_blossom on July 12, 2003
    YOU HAD 2 LEAVE IT THERE!! nooooo!! please!! please!! update i really wanna know wat happends next ur really a talented author.... heheh!! that's all buhbye!!
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  • From ANON - dem on July 12, 2003
    neat! more please. =)
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  • From ANON - Kel on July 12, 2003
    Ooooooh...very nice. This looks to be another great D/Hr fic with an interesting angle. Good job! More soon please!
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  • From ANON - Draco_Fan on July 11, 2003
    I like it alot! I really like your style of writing and I can't wait... I hope you update soon! Draco and Hermione are the best together and you keep the characters in their original characterization... They're not different! Update soon.. PLEASE!
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  • From ANON - HPfreak18 on July 11, 2003
    Very good indeed. Nicely done and written!
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  • From ANON - angelina on July 11, 2003
    Very good so far--I'm very anxious to see what happens next!
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