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Reviews for This Subdued Fire

By : gammiepie
  • From ANON - Samm on September 27, 2003
    hey i love your story it has lots of great things in it and very detialed. i have a question was loin and the serpent part 2 the last chapter of the story? if its not when are u going to update?
    ~Samm
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  • From ANON - LeAnn on September 26, 2003
    Wow!!! That's all I can say. I really do think your a genius! I wouldn't have been able to write anything like your story. Well I hope you post more soon. I"ll be waiting lol.
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  • From ANON - Blacksatin on September 24, 2003
    Really good story (I'm sure u've heard those words alot ;). One thing I'd like to point out, actually two; is it just me or do you seem to make a parody on Dumbledore's twinkling eyes?? hmmm...that's what I thought,lol. Another is, and I don't mean to insult or be rude, but you really seem to have the whole "fairy tale" thing goin' down. What I mean is that, well, everything seems to just be too... unrealistic... you might wanna tone that down a bit. Like when Draco made ALL the newspapers burst into flames? I don't think that's really possible, even if it is in a magic wizarding world, it's just not realistic. There's alot of other things in there that just make you think "damn! everything seems to be going their way!" type of scenarios. Ok, enough of my nagging, don't mind me, I'm just a nagaholic who just happens to have a cold and on meds for the time being. Keep up the wonderful work and I'll keep nagging!
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  • From ANON - luxy on September 24, 2003
    Brava! Brava! That was a wonderful battle scene, didn't even think that you would put it during the commencement dance. Your story is always fantastic and draws me in and away from all the things I should be doing! Thanks! :> Hopefully you can find time to keep up the amazing work, I don't think I could stand it if you left this unfinished! Anyways just wanted to congratulate you and maybe encourage you to get into writing mode! Cheers for now! -luxy
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  • From ANON - Hexia on September 16, 2003
    WAUW!!!!
    I had to like read it twice before coping it for real!!
    Please don't end it here - I totally agree with the other reviewers: We want to know what happens next!!!!!

    I love your smut >dirty smile< - your drama >oh the drama! Oh the humanity!
    who doesn't want to be princess for a day???<
    - the action >bloody brilliant!!<
    - the undertones of SOMETHING with Snape... What happend to Prof. Vector by the way?? What IS it with him and .???.??? And mayby Millicient is a "dark horse in the running" (not for the prom, since it's kind of over, but anyway...*LOL*) ...

    I am looking every day for more to come - even though I respect that you have a life outside fanfiction... - maybe ... :)

    Anyways ... LOVE IT, LOVE IT, LOVE IT!!!

    Love to you as always!!
    Hexia

    PS/ I didn't get to read your first version of the 2. part (weekends - familyvisit ...), so I don't know what I missed, but the 2. part now lying here is fan-f*....-tastic!
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  • From ANON - Jules on September 15, 2003
    Whoa!
    What a great battle scene!
    I really liked the culmination to the Voldemort section of the plot. Too bad Hermione's dress was ruined and she & Draco didn't get a chance to dance more ;P
    I look forward to reading more.
    Bring on the Smut!!
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  • From ANON - ashley on September 13, 2003
    Well, I liked it the way it was before, but I liked it either way. To me, this fic is more about Hermione than Draco, so I understand why it was the way it was before hand. I thought it was brilliant, both parts.
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  • From ANON - ps on September 13, 2003
    Oh My GOD! There are no words to describe how much I enjoyed the new chapters. You are truly the best fic writer ever in mmblemble opinion. Please do continue.
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  • From ANON - yoli on September 13, 2003
    I know you ended this with "Victory!" and Riddle being dead bu-ut... the Draco and Hermione-ness is not done yet! The ring *needs* to be clarified and IkindafeelbadforRonniesoumpleasetellusifhe'sokay. >.>
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  • From ANON - Talaymina on September 13, 2003
    Great story! I hope you write what happens to them all before you finish this story. Keep up the wonderful writing.
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  • From ANON - Lessa on September 13, 2003
    *Bug Eyed* yee-owe-sa! I'm stunned. Practically speechless even. I don't even know where to begin... so a round of loud clapping and OMG's and I'll leave the speech making on your brillance until I'm more cohert and able to form complete sentences again.


    Thank you
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  • From ANON - Tabata on September 13, 2003
    Yes!!!! Victory...

    but that means the end of the story is close, isn
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  • From ANON - Kiristeen on September 13, 2003
    ::shivers:: wow. That was definitely an eerie battle! Love this story.

    Kiri
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  • From ANON - ~*KITTYPILLA*~ on September 07, 2003
    Where to begin?? I'm speechless! This is fantastic! This is the first fic to ever make me cry... (*sniff*) The sections about Hermione and the aftermath of her parents death was fabulously written :) terribly sad stuff. Anyway i'm looking forward to furthevelevelopments ;) keep up the good work!
    *~KITTYPILLA*~
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  • From ANON - jeannette on September 06, 2003
    will there be a sequel?the story was so intreging.it was beautifully written,enough to give jk a run for her money.i would to read how they defeat voldemort,and lucious.
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