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Reviews for The Lion\'s Serpent

By : Zoe
  • From ANON - liz on July 31, 2003
    Please update soon... It's getting really good!!!
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  • From ANON - deni on July 31, 2003
    oooooohhhh obsessive, psychotic Draco, Sexy Snape, and a lovesick Ron, THIS FIC HAS EVERYTHING!!! Please update soon, its just eating me alive!^^

    much luvness
    Deni
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  • From ANON - jenbachand on July 31, 2003
    Ok, I'm really liking this. I do have a question about Sinistra. Were her and Sev getting it on or is it something else. She seemed genuinely jealous. I'm concerned about Ron's drinking and his wand collection. Is someone using Ron? He seems a bit of itf it. I'm excited to find out who the counter spy is too. It's a good story. I'm anxiously awaiting updates.

    Je
    jen
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  • From ANON - nesscafe on July 31, 2003
    What a great story! I had to pick my chin up off the table cause my jaw fell open when I read that Severus was standing there the whole time! WOW! I hope you will update soon!
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  • From ANON - Rilla on July 31, 2003
    I love chapte Tha That was great. Can't wait to read more.
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  • From ANON - Laerai on July 31, 2003
    You take such twists with the story, and yet it all works! Fantastic. I'm really loving this one!
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  • From ANON - Katharina on July 31, 2003
    What are you complaining about? This chapter came out wayyyyyyyyyyyyy cool! LOL. It's way early in the morning and I'm sitting here reviewing awesome fics... *drools and swears she'll go to bed sometime before dawn*
    Tootles!
    ~Kate~ ;o) *Also known as the Immortal Queen of Absolute Insomnia*

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  • From ANON - HPfreak18 on July 30, 2003
    This is such a good story, I cannot wait for your next update!!
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  • From ANON - HPfreak18 on July 30, 2003
    This is such od sod story, I cannot wait for your next update!!
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  • From ANON - jessicat1982 on July 26, 2003
    I really like this story, but I think you should change the summary. I didn't read it for a while because I thought it was going to be a draco/hermione story. you have a very good writing style and I like the fact that you're taking it slow between the two of them. It makes the reader feel more involved in the story. I'd like to see more up close interaction with severus and hermione. for instance the narative scene in the dungeon where hermione is picking his brain about everything and nothing, well, it would have been nice to have been witness to a sample of it through choice dialogue.d ald also like to see you avoid the always asked question: why did he become a deatheater? please don't use it. your story is very good so far and I really can't wait for you to update again but er..I guess it's a pet peeve of mine since everyone tends to use it and come up with the same answer:P

    looking forward to reading more. I really liked the ending to the last chapter. i felt like although it was contrived by severus to carry the plan forward, there was still a sensuality about him whispering in her ear. I can't wait to see what he teaches her for the ball. my sniffer is detecting some lemon scented freshness:P

    great job on the story so far and I hope my review provides the type of feedback you were looking for:)
    Jess
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  • From ANON - Belladonna on July 25, 2003
    Wonderful. You really do write well; but my favorite thing about your story is Snape. The way you write Snape, brooding eyes, lean hungry body, and a voice like sin... the possibilities are really endless. Hermione is feisty enough to keep up with him, and there is a prevalent sexual tension between the two. Will it be expounded upon in chapter 9?
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  • From ANON - Jeniah Rae on July 25, 2003
    I really like how this fan fic was written and how everything is playing out. I am thourally enjoying it. I can just hardly wait untill more of it comes out
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  • From ANON - Krista on July 24, 2003
    w33t! I can't wait! This is a really great fic!
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  • From ANON - Cat on July 24, 2003
    This story is awesome! I can't wait to see what happens next!
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  • From ANON - Anastaja on July 24, 2003
    More! More! More! I wanna know Ron's reaction now...I wonder...will he tell Harry...never know...well, I don't actually..heehee..so i'll find out next chappie, which I hope you write soon!!!!....I'll be checking up!!! You Rock!!! Princess_Anastaja x x x
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