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Reviews for The Lion\'s Serpent

By : Zoe
  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on April 15, 2008
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

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  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on July 06, 2007
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - Zoe Elizabeth on July 19, 2004
    I really want to thank you all for reviewing The Lion's Serpent, but the truth of the matter is, I am just a beginner at this. This was my very first story and it's been a while since I first started writing it. I look back to the beginning and I think it could use a lot of work. I think I've progessed slightly as a writer and I really love this fic so I want it to be great. Just the thought of rewriting, editing, and the long hours required to polish this fic up really discourages me. I have not abandoned it. I think it would be a sad failure if I did. So I hope people will still read this when I am finally ready to finish it .. (hopefully that will be soon)

    Thank you for your support and comments. I will work on this fic as soon as I can.

    Zoe
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  • From ANON - In love with this fic on December 14, 2003
    It's been months and i still am going back and rereading this fic cause though there is some very talented work out there yours has captured the very meaning of imagination. (and i have never told anyone that before) Very time i reread this fic i am awestruck by your talent and skill for fan fic writing. And every time i read it am am excited by the cliffys. Well reasons i love your fic because it is A W E S O M E! ! ! ! ! ! and if you have abandoned this fic (though i wouldn't know why) please just leave a little message why or what ever
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  • From ANON - anxious on December 02, 2003
    When are you going to update this?
    I've been waiting for a long time, and I'm getting the feeling that you've abandoned the lion's serpent.
    Please tell me you haven't because I was really feeling it. I want it back and I want it back now. There was so much going on--what happened?

    Oh, well! Please let us know when you've updated it.

    Yours truly,
    A really desperate (and loyal) fan.
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  • From ANON - MsPixie on November 20, 2003
    WOW! Your fic is FANTASTIC. I have been reading Harry Potter fanfics for a really long time now, but you are the second person I ever reviewed for! (so, please take it as a huge compliment.)

    Well, one thing first, so its out of the way: I don't know if you rectified it in the mean time (then ignore this, I read the fic quite some time ago and you said in last A/N you ed ted to go back and correct any mistakes.). In the first few chapters, your punctuation (," " or ! ?) was a bit out of place, like the ? at the end of the line instead of behind the actual question. But no biggie, cause its something you can easily change, while your style is great the way it is.

    OK, I won't review to bug you for quick updates, instead I want to tell you why I enjoyed your fic so much. (this might take a while :} )
    1) Your characters aren't OCC (easteast they don't jump each other after 7 years of loathing. Slowly but surely it is creaping up on them though. Very believable!)
    2) You obviously have a nice plot going there that is realistic (well, Potteruniverse-realistic at least!)
    3) The story I very imaginative, very distinguishable like no other HG-SS I've ever read (yes, its been quite a few.)
    4) It is simply gripping. I couldn't stop reading until the very last sentence. Was a bit devastated that I now had to wait for next chapter. But I will wait pariently. Don't let yourself get rushed. You obviously put a lot of time and energy into writing this and I wouldn't want your wonderful style to be diminished because you feel the preasure to update! So, go nice and easy on yourself, but don't forget there are people out there that are really looking forward for an add on, too.

    Finally, at the end of an awfully long review *grins sheepishly for bad habit*

    Keep up the wonderful work! You truly are gifted (who needs Rowling when you are around? ;p )

    Peace,Love&Respect

    MsPixie
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  • From KagomeRain on September 23, 2003
    evil man you need to update please I am biting my nails waiting you deffinately have one of they best stories here Oh i am going to have to wait arent i oh well i just hope ve nve nails left by the time you post ^___^
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  • From ANON - Honey B on September 03, 2003
    I love this story! Keep the updates coming!
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  • From ANON - Professor-Hermione-Snape on September 02, 2003
    Hey, I'm sorry, but your story is FAR from boring. It's one of the most exciting stories out there of HG/SS.
    But if you think your story needs work, hey, I can't stop you. ;)
    I just think you should know that your story has greatly inspired me enough to post my own work on ff.net.
    I'm Professor-Hermione-Snape there. Without this fic, I wouldn't be posting my own work at all. I hope you
    see soon how talented you are. And please, for the love of anything that is good in this world, PLEASE continue
    your story when time allows you. I completely beg that of you. I'm hanging from a Huge cliff that I prey to be
    rescued soon from. Good luck-P-H-S. :)
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  • From ANON - Linis on September 02, 2003
    A great story... can't wait to see what happens next... Sirius is gonna blow... and think of what Harry will say when he finds out from his gtherther....

    Great continue please

    soon

    LINIS
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  • From ANON - nesscafe on September 02, 2003
    Zoe, darling! STOP IT!!! Your writing is wonderful! Honest! I would not read and review if it sucked! And I would not get all excited when you update if your work wasn't worth reading! Sometimes we can be our own worst critic! And seriously you are over analysing your work honey 'cause it's really fantastic as it is. I understand high standards, but really I think your work on TLS is better then J.K. did on OoTP! That book was good don't get me wrong, but it went on and on before it was interesting and well... It just wasn't her bestk. k. However, your little fic here is just wonderful. It's interesting, well writen, the plot is moving along. Really, you are fretting for nothing. And the authors notes don't bother me. I usually skip them if I don't want to read them. So, in short if you are worrying this much maybe you should get a beta so that you don't get so worked up over your writing. A beta will be honest and tell you if you need to fix here or there. I personally think your story is wonderful just the way it is. I look forward to your next update and if you still don't trust your work email me, we need tve ave a chat!

    Hugs,
    Ness
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  • From ANON - Darkfaith on September 01, 2003
    Damn cliffhangers!! Means you have to update even faster!
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 31, 2003
    GAH!! WRITE MORE!!
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  • From ANON - kuky on August 30, 2003
    cliff!! update soon!! Nice one!
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  • From ANON - Honey B on August 29, 2003
    I love it! Can't wait for the next chapter.
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