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Reviews for A Proper Proposition

By : Veresna
  • From ANON - amazingenthusiasto on December 15, 2005
    Best.Snape/Tonks.Ever.

    That was absolutely delightful! Playful and fun and sexy and even a tad angsty near the end. Brilliant. I loved it.


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  • From ANON - phobos on October 01, 2005
    Aw!!!
    I LOVE this fic!
    Snape and Tonks had never crossed my mind as a couple, but the way you portray them...
    And I'm most curious: who will Snape turn out to be?
    You are right, it does screem for another chapter :)
    You did a great job, hope you keep it up.
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 31, 2005
    Please! continue it!
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  • From ANON - jose on August 15, 2005
    Hello Veresna, You are the absolute best I have encountered thus far. I like your Snape, he is mean, short tempered but has a sense of humor. And he is forceful and likes his women to beg but only for more of the same. I am sorry you have not finished this story, perhaps you will soon?
    You get better with every story you write. The christmas one was superb. The last one: the sexual initiation of Severus Snape was sublime. I could almost see him in that room, studying his subject. It made me laugh and I am not ashamed to say: It made me terribly horny, aroused I should say.
    Please please write again? You are the best.

    Jose
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  • From ANON - Andrea B. on February 23, 2005
    ok.. seriously.. you ought to finish this story...!!!! it's going endemoniadamente good.. probably 'cause of the fact of the Tonks/Snape thing, instead of the normal Hr/SS... oh and by the way, i just LOVED "Don't lie to me" and "Secretly Slytherin", i think you made a great character of Helena! (well in case i expressed myself in the wrong way, this is in spanish, so you can translate it if you want to: hiciste de Helena un personaje genial y original por su diversa personalidad...!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Mys Duende on July 30, 2003
    What can I say that I haven't already said about a Veresna Ussep fic? Her fics are guaranteed naughtiness and always uncannily spot-on with Snape. As you know, Ms. Ussep, I not not into the Snape and Tonks pairing. But you did IT. You managed to convince me that
    Tonks is the ballsy kind of gal who could actually make Snape loosen up a tad and, in the process, thoroughly aggravates him while in the
    midst of an orgasm. What Snape considers a "no-no", Tonks considers an "oh,, ye, yes" She's cool; he's elegant. She trips and stumbles; he glides and swoops. She's raunchy; he's sensual. She likes rainbow color..things; he likes black - or natural..things. And somewhere in between these two and their blatantly obvious differences, they meld together perfectly as man and woman in the midst frustrated horniness. The best part about Tonks? She can MORPH - which leaves us all breathless awaiting some wonderful sequel ideas.. picturing the look on Snape's face when he discovers Tonks newly acquired tongue stud during a french kiss - Tonks: "cool, huh Snapes?!" ) The gal can morph into *anything* that Snape might desire, yet given his first opportunity, he actually opts for her own earthy "natural" self. Go figure. Oil and Vinegar - sometimes, but with a laugh. Infact, I think the neighbors were disturb by my late night giggles. I LOVED it and Ibreabreathlessly awaiting more -- A wonderful lemon drop - 5 wands UP.

    ~Mys. Duende
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  • From ANON - gx-Silver on June 23, 2004
    Hmm, what a very tasty treat. Hell, I love anything involving Tonks or Snape, and this had both! I say definitely will be anxiously awaiting more hot chapter Do let this story end!
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  • From ANON - twisted_lemons on June 17, 2004
    I must say this is one of the oddest and one of the most well written pairings I have ever had the pleasure to write. I have to commend you on your talents at writing for these two. I would have never thought of it. . .but in truth the way you've written it makes it so belivable. Good work hon. If you wouldn't mind, I rather admire your ways of protraying Professer Snape. I'm currently working on a story and would appriciate your help with his characterization. Please e-mail me. I'd really value your opinion.
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  • From ANON - amsev on February 22, 2004
    Now that was a delightfully hot little story. It does indeed beg for a sequel. I'm really starting to like the NT/SS pairing! I hope you write more soon! Very in-character for both!
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  • From ANON - Abra_Appelby on February 11, 2004
    WOW! This story was amazing. Both funny and erotic. And your Snape is the most snapeish Snape I've ever read! He's better than the original one, who was supposed to be PG13.
    A sequel would be a real treat!
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  • From ANON - Danielle on December 16, 2003
    Yep, this story practically demands a sequel!! And I for one, will be on the lookout for it!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Lindsay on November 04, 2003
    I thought this was absolutely charming, well written and perfectly in character for both of them.

    I really enjoyed it and would love to see a sequel. Thank you and good luck with your talent in the future.

    -Linds.
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  • From ANON - Dana on October 06, 2003
    I followed a link from a site called 'Morbid Fascina', ', after they insulted a friend of mine by calling her fic bad. So, what else did they deemed bad?

    You story was the next one that I found. And the pairing did scare me. But you were able to write a smart, angsty,funny and incredibly sex Snape het fic (Something that is not done well at all) and to make it Tonks/Snape...wow. You wableable to incorporate Snape insercurities and Tonks goofiness and lack of balance into a believeable desire for sexual connection.

    And yes, the shapechanging stuff was squicky, but it was wonderfully funny and sweet. The reactions of both characters feel wonderfully in charcter, and the chance that Snape could put away some of his insecurites, and possibly have an affair with this woman, was very sweet indeed.

    I am reccing this as a very good example of Snape hetfic-k, vk, very good hetfic in general!

    Thank you for an enjoyable read!

    Dana.

    P.S. If you have a Livejournal, please write to me and let me know what your handle is. If not, and if you would like one, let me know- I have a code!
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  • From ANON - Snapextonks on September 21, 2003
    Very nice story. So nice that a LJ community on this pairing.

    http://www.livejournal.com/community/snapetonks/

    Has placed a link to your story on it's message board.
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  • From ANON - Trish on September 20, 2003
    Superb fic! I have only one complaint ... the story wasn't long enough. You've left me suffering from a Tonk/Snape addiction with no more chapters to feed it.
    Please write another story about this excellently-plotted relationship.
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