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Reviews for The Power of Kisses

By : Aefi
  • From ANON - Morwen Snape on July 21, 2003
    I just now found your wonderful story and wanted to finish what there was before reviewing.

    The first two chappies were great. I love the, "in lust, no love with him". It is funny because it is trAnd And the letters between Hermione, Sev, and Dumbly were great. I haven't had that much fun reading mail since reading "Raven Mail"
    And Dorky that is just humerous. I actually fell out of my chair laughing (well not really, but it made you feel good didnt it?).

    *trumpets sound* To the third chapter...

    *wipes off screen* Nice, very nice. Although I can't bee the that Hermoine (after having HOTT SEX with Sev.) told him(Severus) to leave when "Frogman-man-man-man" [sorry bout that i couldn't resist] knoced on her door. What the...? Shoot, if I just got done having HOTT SEX with Sev. I woult cat care if an angel came to my door and said, "I will give you immortality, if you just open the door" I would stay in bed and give him mad cuddles.

    Waiting patiently for the next chappie,
    Morwen Snape

    PS if you are having a hard time reading wI wrI wrote just go through and put your hand over the ()'s and all shall turn out well. I have a encyency to put it nonsence when I am really worked up. (like right now!!)
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  • From ANON - Lady Aidil on July 21, 2003
    I love this fic(as well as all fics of you-I know I`m repeating myself after reviews on FFNet yet I hope you would be rather conent reading my praises about your work once more).While I was reading the chapter including the scene after the explosion in Potions class-you know-Bride of Frankenstein and"you look lovely today" I couldn`t help but laughed so loudly(in public internet-cafe!)that the other people were very astonished looking at me(yet I don`t care about)and had tears in my eyes-you are gorgoeus when you have been writing such funny parts of the story-it`s the reason I like your fics so much!Of course-I admire the part of chapter with lemons as well-every time you write smut I read it with great pleasure.And I don`t be upset if Snape and Hermiona were sometimes OOC,all the more when it would be opportunity to make more fun of them.So write more for joy of ypur devoted readers(I belong to them obviously).
    Reagards.L.A.
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  • From ANON - Cherry 7-up on July 21, 2003
    GO SEVERUS! hell yeah! i didnt review for the last chapter, so i'll let you know now..the bride of frankenstein...genius! and the rose with the note just adorable. but this chapter was fantastic. cant wait to see what happens...hope Frogman gets whats coming to him.
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  • From ANON - Glinda Trisstt on July 21, 2003


    OOooooh...... OK that was worth waiting for !! ~_^

    Glinda
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  • From ANON - Zenia on July 21, 2003
    i love your stories corazon! will there be more to this?
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  • From ANON - jessicat1982 on July 21, 2003
    oooh! that scene with the blindfold was really hot! more of that please! and shame on hermione for making severus leave. poor snape. gah! I love it. can't wait for the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Severus on July 21, 2003
    This is a great story. Keep it up, and could you read one of my stories. It's a Snape/Hermione one. Just look for the ID Severus.
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  • From ANON - Humaira on July 21, 2003
    Ahh! Brilliant, keep going! Will Mortimer find out and will he care? Loved that bit with ALbus threatening him then saying, Oh Severus you washed your hair! And the muggle Magazine was just genius!
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  • From ANON - arcee on July 21, 2003
    Love it, you could write romance novels :
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  • From ANON - Red Writing Hood on July 21, 2003
    Well, another perfect chapter. The lovemaking was sweet. I love the way you had Severus realize that the job wasnt worth losing her over. I cant wait to see if there is an interaction between Mortimer and Severus...I look forward to it. Oh, Im working on my update...but been working like a dog at work...will get to it soon...

    RWH
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  • From ANON - Karena Elizabeth on July 21, 2003
    *faints* Okay... it is clear here who is the evil one for cliffhangers. I thank the muses that they've visited you again for this wonderful little fiction. I hope all is going smoothly, and that the chapters pour forth easily and updates happen quickly *grins and winks* My only question is this: What is Hermione going ot say to Mort the Frogboy?

    Anyway, great chapter!
    Karena Elizabeth
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  • From ANON - Andrian on July 21, 2003
    OMY did you ever fall off the wagon my dear! That was so so erotic and wow! Excellent (though I ashamed to say it, glad you fell lol we will watch out for lighting together)
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  • From EVegvary on July 21, 2003
    I laughed until I cried! My kids looked at my askance and the cat ran so fast out of the room it bonked into the glass in the french doors. Bravo! You've got a deft hand for this sort of humor - a rousing success. I am looking very forward to your updates!
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  • From ANON - Campy Capybara on July 21, 2003
    Corazon darling,

    This is a lovely humourous fic! I like the way you had the essence of Sabrina's romantic comedy. I enjoyed the letters in Chapter 1 and the in-sync dinner Severus and Hermione has - that always cracks me up, especially when I saw it done in Two Week's notice. I lol at strawberry scented shampoo! *giggles* Can't wait to read more!
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  • From ANON - DANIELLE on July 21, 2003
    I LAUGHED SO HARD I ALMOST FELL OFF MY CHAIR. CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER
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