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  • From ANON - Apollonia on November 08, 2003
    Short chapter, but good. Can't wait to see Draco and Hermione get it on again!!!!
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  • From ANON - Cherry Lips on October 14, 2003
    You
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  • From ANON - higapox on October 14, 2003
    i think that ron should pose as hermiony an have an affair with malfoy
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  • From ANON - Apollonia on October 14, 2003
    Short chapter but intruiging. What is Draco planning to do to Harry? I really can't wait to see what he has in store for him. Please continu) Ap)
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  • From ANON - Apollonia on October 03, 2003
    WOW! Draco was quite understanding with Hermione. I didn't expect that. Will Draco go and kick Herry's ass big time? I would think the whe would since Harry is not the least apologetic for what happened. Please continue. I want to know what will happen next. ;)
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  • From ANON - Cherry Lips on September 22, 2003
    Awww
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  • From ANON - deedee on September 22, 2003
    Wow!!! Harry has some nerve talking to Draco like that. After all, he did just have sex with his girlfriend. But, I'm glad Draco didn't get mad at her. Or maybe he's too angry with Harry, and when he's done with Harry, he'll be very angry with her. Write more.
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  • From ANON - Kiki on September 22, 2003
    I likis sis story a lot! Very nice twist! Keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - deedee on September 18, 2003
    It's about time! Just kidding:) I didn't think Hermione would still want to have sex with Harry, but I guess when you're caught up in the moment, you can't help youself. She should feel really guilt that she cheated, especially because she just got caught. And Harry needs a good assing from Draco, even if Draco decides to dump Hermione. If she still had sex with Harry, even when he turned back into himself, doesn't that mean that she wanted Harry (maybe somewhere in the back of her mind)? It just seemed that in the pervious chapters, she was loyal to Draco. She had felt so terrible about not realizing (when Harry had first disgused himself as Draco) it wasn't him to the point that she was crying. I was just wondering. Write more soon:)
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  • From ANON - Cherry Lips on September 17, 2003
    Ch. 9

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  • From ANON - Campy Capybara on September 17, 2003
    I am shocked that Hermione didn't understand that she was raped by her best friend. When polyjuiced!Harry had sex with her the first time - that was nonconsentual sex. Hermione wouldn't have had sex with Harry whilst in a relationship with Draco - it would be out of character for her. And then Harry did it again the second time - premeditated rape. It didn't matter that Hermione wanted it later in the scene - Harry had initiated it without her consent.

    I was enjoying your story until Chapter 8; now i'm not so sure how you will be able to sort out this mess. While it is true that Hermione might forgive Harry what he did, this will undoubtedly create a gulf of mistrust against her so-called friend. If one cannot trust a friend not to take advantage of oneself, who can one trust?

    I'm curious as to what Draco would do to Harry for this to remain D/Hr - it was obvious that Hermione was unfaithful to Draco when she wasn't able to keep her hormones under control. Frankly, I felt that Hermione wouldn't have continued with Harry when Harry changed. It would have been far more realistic for your story to have her confront Harry than to allow Harry to complete the sex act, thereby making Hermione just as guilty as Harry for hurting Draco.
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  • From ANON - Apollonia on September 17, 2003
    OMFG!!!! What's going to happen now that Draco has seen Harry between Hermione's legs with his own eyes!?!?!? Please don't let Draco be upset with Hermione, although, I admit, I'm kind of upset with her myself seeing that she willingly gave herself up to Harry. What drama! Please update soon! This is one of my most favorite Draco/Hermione stories of all time!!!!
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  • From ANON - sky on September 17, 2003
    What and where is this "special spot" you wrote about? Are you talking about teh Grafenberg spot or the clitoris? One is inside the vagina, oth other is not. If you mean the Grafenberg spot, Draco's tongue must be hella long because it is located behind the public bone on the anterior wall of the vagina. I doubt any tongue could reach that far considering when you stick out your tongue it only extends a bit over an inch...some people can extend it a bit more but I doubt they could actually lick the G spot. As for the clitoris, it's not inside the vagina at all. What in the hell is Draco licking, then?
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  • From ANON - fruity on September 17, 2003
    OMG, please please continue! This story rox!
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  • From ANON - cd on September 17, 2003
    if i were draco, i would brake up with hermione on the spot. she is very OOC. normally she would be much more suspicous right after the first time she discovered.
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