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Reviews for Dark Coil

By : gotsnape
  • From ANON - Sineed on June 12, 2004
    Hi. I discovered your wonderful story a few days ago, and have been obsessively reading it ever since, til I reached the end of chapter 42. You've got a good plot here, and I like how you're keeping Snape good and snarky. Though I'm wondering: are you going to introduce some OoP stuff in here? Like some of the characters, or 12 Grimmauld Place, f'r instance?
    Good work, though. I don't think Olivia's Mary-Sueish at all.
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  • From ANON - Dannie on March 18, 2004
    ohh yeah.. you have to update soon... i love this story.. such a nice change from what i am use to. please!
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  • From RickyRoo on January 26, 2004
    You're back!!! Yahoo! I have been soooooo slow in getting another chapter out - for both Mistress of Slytherin and Dangerous Liasions. But moving and having sick computers and bratty two year olds will do that. Good to see you back!!
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  • From ANON - RickyRoo on October 24, 2003
    Dude!!!! There's something missing!!! Where's chapter 19??? I missed all the goods. No fair!!!
    ~Lara
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  • From ANON - RickyRoo on October 21, 2003
    No!!! Severus must live!

    This is so well done. :) I'm taking my time because I just don't want it to end. He he.

    Hugs!

    ~Lara
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  • From ANON - Rabid Fan on September 22, 2003
    This is absolutely excellent. Hooked much.
    Apart from, where did chapter 19 go?
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  • From ANON - stringybark on September 10, 2003
    Greetings.

    Yours is the first fanfiction I have ever read, and it is the meter by which I measure all others. I must say, you have set the bar high and I enjoy your efforts immensely. I hope you will continue to write further episodes in the very near future. I am sorry if this is not the sort of "review" of your work you were after, I have never done one of those before either. I just thought I'd let you know that your work is read and appreciated. Sometimes that is enough.

    Thoughtfully,
    Stringybark
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  • From blueribbon on August 23, 2003
    Brilliant writing! Nothing I have read in a while amazed me as much as this...and again you prove to me that the author's of the fan fiction network are truly brilliant!

    -Blue Ribbon
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  • From ANON - michelle on August 22, 2003
    i am really enjoying this. it came highly recommended (by zee - kisses!) and now i want to go grab my little brothers harry potter books and read them again. i really like the interplay between them. olivia is so funny and snape is so... whatever snape is, but i like him too. cant wait to read more.
    michelle
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  • From RickyRoo on August 22, 2003
    Dude! You've been spelling Hermione wrong!!! Tut tut!

    He he... you know I'm just teasin'... although you did goof up her name a bit. :)
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  • From RickyRoo on August 22, 2003
    Hey!

    A beautifully written chapter. I can feel the adrenaline building!!!

    See ya!

    ~ Lara
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  • From ANON - Zee on August 01, 2003
    I am so glad to see this posted here. This is such a fabulous fic and one of the most well-written ones I have ever seen.

    Am looking forward to more!
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  • From RickyRoo on July 29, 2003
    Hey, fancy seeing your fic about the pages of adultfan. I've posted a few things myself in the last few days.

    This is well done by the way. I've always liked the prospect of venturing into Snape's re-entry to the Wizarding world.

    See ya!

    Lara
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  • From ANON - ladydeathfaerie on July 26, 2003
    madam, i bow at your feet, chanting 'i'm not worthy!' in my most sincere tone. i am totally and utterly blown away by what i've just read. your imagery and flow have me captivated, and i am at a loss to express how unworthy i now feel. i should run to the corner, hiding behind the pieces of tripe i call my stories after this jaunt through the lanes of your very capable imagination. the tha that madam shark wishes you to read what i've written, with massive amounts of her help, and posted here and with your group, fills me with shame after this. i am truly not worthy, and it is a pity more people cannot see the beauty of severus snape as he was meant to be. a mean, darkly brooding bastard.....dead sexy, but mean and nasty.

    please forgive me for stepping of plf place and daring to hope that i am a writer. you clearly have much more talent and grace with the written word thacan can ever begin to master. please allow me to occasionally kiss the hem of your robes as you pass me by.......

    thank you for sharing this beautiful vision with us mere mortals. i look forward to more

    yours with my best reguards,
    ladydeathfaerie
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  • From ANON - Belladonna on July 26, 2003
    Wonderful wonderful wonderful. Very good job, intriguing plot, and well fleshed characters. Do continue!
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