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Reviews for A War Mages Path

By : AngelShinigami

From ANON - Eggroll=O) on July 14, 2004
Hello?!
Where is Chapter 3?!
How come you havent updated?!
You have to continue this story!!It's so unique and i absolutely love your original characters :P
especially Bloodlust ('cause of all his crazy clothes) and Quick Silver 'cause she acts like me and my friends all rolled into one (and thats scary)
Anyway!!
Please continue this story!
-Eggroll=O)
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From ANON - michael on June 06, 2004
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From ANON - Mitzu on April 25, 2004
WOW!!! This is REALLY great... I just LOVE it!! But one thing I noticed though, is that you have the wronge first name for Zambini... You wrote Basil, when his/her name is Blaise... Just thought I'd point it out to you... But besides that, I think this is an amzing story, an I would be honoured if you would e-mail me when you update... Thanks SO much!!
Hugs & Kisses
Mitzu
mitzu_mitzu@hotmail.com
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From ANON - Osiris on January 18, 2004
Hello, I just found this story and i love I I really like the depth you have in it and the characters as well. I have noticed you haven't updated for a long time. Have you stopped writing the story. Or are you going to post it when it is complete? I hope you haven't stopped writing it because i would love to read more.

~Osiris
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From ANON - lee marker on January 10, 2004
I love this story so much it is a grate ideal.

Up date this soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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From ANON - Leelee on January 10, 2004
ohoh I love this story, you're good! hope you update soon, and when you do, could you send me a mail?
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From ANON - Kaledra Mitan on December 22, 2003
I just wanted to know if this fic has been abandoned?
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From ANON - chriswiz on October 09, 2003
Very nice! I am enjoying your story. Can't wait for more. Using a beta would be nice. Even though the human brain can read what isn't there, it can give you a headache making the adjustments.
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From Naiad95531 on October 04, 2003
MOOOOOOOOOOOOOORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Please *puppy dog eyes*
You have a few spelling mistakes but seeing as how you write this early in the morning that makes sense:)
I find the concept of Harry being a Mage just wonderful!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! There needs to be more Harry as a Mage stories!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I want to see where this story is going!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! You know what? It is hard to keep track of proper spelling in the early hours of the mng. ng. I'm so tired th'm 'm not sure if I spelled where right, though I think I did!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

from Muahahahahaaaaaaaaaaaaa!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! A TIRED AND VERY ODD BOUNCYNESS:D
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From Naiad95531 on October 04, 2003
LOVE the story so far!!!!!!!!!!!:D Nice plot:) Just to point out a small mistake there was someone you called Basil Zambini. Did you mean Blaise Zabini?

Keep up the good work!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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From ANON - Yve on September 17, 2003
OK...OK, I'M ADDICTED...More more more please

Now to something constructive.
As much as I love this plot line. The story needs to be fleshed out a little more. You're going from scene to scene without really fulfilling the reader's needs. So that the characters seems to be hopping around without enough explanation of what they are thinking and feeling that is motivating their actions.
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From ANON - Julia on August 31, 2003
when are you going to updat? its the last day of st. st. tomorrow is september 1st ill be leaveing for hogwarts in a day
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From ANON - Anon on August 06, 2003
please update soon because I really love A War Mages Path.
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From ANON - Alex Potter on August 03, 2003
thats a relly cool story how long will it be till you do the next chapter?
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From ANON - April on July 31, 2003
update soon please. Not much holds me still but your story did and can't wait for another chapter. Please!!!!!!!!!!!
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