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Reviews for Dangerous efforts.

By : Vierveijzer
  • From ANON - hermioneSNAPEfan1983 on March 24, 2014
    she never told young snape her last name so thats how young snape knew her last name because it wasnt young snape but the old snape glamourd as young snape!!!

    also what WAS her answer?? Oh my sweet Merlin! This was even better than the first time we made love.
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  • From ANON - hermioneSNAPEfan1983 on March 19, 2014
    so thats why snape doesnt remeber anything from back in her time?!! hehehe oh no they forgot to do the contraception spell or take a potion of it?? will hermione become pregnant by snape??? also hope there is MORE to this story?? RIGHT??
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  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on June 30, 2007
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - WriterLady1031 on December 14, 2003
    I like your story, I really do. But I had to stop reading at chapter 2-- the grammar, syntax, and spelling errors all over the place were driving me crazy. You have strange verb tenses and fractured sentences appearing in more than one paragraph. Please, please, PLEASE read over your work BEFORE you post it! Read it slowly out loud first, then get a beta-reader to look at it.
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  • From ANON - Snapesangel on October 03, 2003
    Ieeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee lovely looking forward to your next fics ;)
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  • From ANON - kath on October 02, 2003
    This was a really unique and well written story. Love the smut too;)
    The ending was a bit confusing though? If Snape transformed into his younger self was he the one hanging upsidedown again? and if so what did he do with his younger version?
    Just small overlooks in an otherwise wonderful story though.
    Keep writing look forward to reading your new fic.
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  • From ANON - GlindaTrisstt on October 01, 2003
    Hey I like the twist at the end !!! He did it himself, yeah baby !!

    Thanks for sharing it.

    Glinda

    ps - new chapter will be up for 'Snape's Obsession' either today or tomorrow, just wanted to let you know.
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  • From ANON - happy on October 01, 2003
    Hi, liked it Maddy, great plot. Loved the reviews.
    l.
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  • From ANON - Olive on September 29, 2003
    If you're going to write a fanfiction please be sure to proofread your story before posting or at least have it beta'd. The plot sounds interesting, but the verb tenses you use are all wrong and the sentences are very poorly written. I highly suggest you comb through this story and rewrite it more professionally.
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  • From ArachneNonafel on September 29, 2003
    A lovely story. I wish I could have gone back myself.....*blushes* Please continue?
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  • From slygriff21 on September 29, 2003
    Awsome story! Is there going to be a sequal? If so, I can't wait to read it.
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  • From ANON - kimmy on September 09, 2003
    I'm really loving this story. I keep checking every day to see if you've added to it. Can't wait for more, and more, and more.... Thank you so much for writing this.
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  • From ANON - Rei on August 31, 2003
    So now that we know about the past, what is going to happen in the present (and the future)? More HG/SS goodness, I hope!
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  • From ANON - GlindaTrisstt on August 26, 2003
    More more more please !!!!

    Can't wait to see how she deals with adult Snape ^_^

    Glinda

    ps - thanks for all of your reviews !!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 19, 2003
    I love what you did at the end. Obliviate! Can't wait for the next chapter
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