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  • From ANON - Faithless on August 03, 2003
    Please update soon because I'm really far more interested in discovering how your version of the 'grey underpants' story ends than I should be and it really isn't healthy! I need you to update so I can get it out of my system!
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  • From ANON - Lynn on August 01, 2003
    This is really interesting and follows my impression of Snape's character and how he would react. Keep up the good work, I am looking forward to new chapters!!
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  • From ANON - Kiristeen on July 30, 2003
    Poor Hermione! LOL She was *so* sure she'd got caught out! : )~ I look forward to reading more.


    Kiri
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  • From ANON - Hurricane on July 30, 2003
    Oh my goodneshe the tension between Snape and Hermione and my curiosity about what Hermione will find when she goes back in time, is driving me crazy (in a good way). Update soon....please! Great story so far.
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  • From ANON - Inge on July 30, 2003
    woohowwwwwwwww snape leaning against walls is always a nice picture LOL -oeps sorry ;) -
    update soon pleaaaaaaaaase

    hugs

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  • From ANON - levans on July 30, 2003
    Ayla,
    You need to work on preposistions. Watch singular to plural verb usage. Always capitalize names of characters. I enjoyed the plot, it seems fun(why else would I read it? I am curious to learn your interpretation of the underwear scene. Perhaps my best advice to you would be to proof-read out loud. If it sounds stilted, or not quite right, then some work may be needed. (also I have noticed missing words in sentences, where if added make sense, but missing leave me scratching my head. Your fellow writer
    L. Evans
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  • From ANON - amethyst on July 29, 2003
    Really, Really looking forward to her going back in time! Love time-turner fics!
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  • From ANON - Andrian on July 29, 2003
    Ah the plot begins to thicken. Lupin and Lavender? Interesting sideline there and thanks for the seperation of the structure!

    By the way have you seen the pics of Lupin in PoA? Shudders. Sigh will hold to my own ideas of what Lupin looks like....

    Cheers
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  • From ANON - Corazon on July 29, 2003
    Maddy,
    Good story. I an very interested
    to read about your version of the
    grey underpants. Keep updating!

    Hugs,
    Corazon
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  • From ANON - Darkfaith on July 29, 2003
    I'm terribly interested in what happens when she uses the time turner. Get to it already!!! Sorry, I'm impatient when I read stuff I like.
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  • From ANON - Scarlett on July 29, 2003
    Awesome story. Can't wait till you get to the greying underpants, lol.
    Good plot idea, and I'm looking foreward to a new chapter.
    Scarlett
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  • From ANON - Inge on July 28, 2003
    This looks promising !!! Love how Snape's mind is working :)
    Update soon please ;)

    Hugs
    SnapesAngel xxx
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  • From ANON - hurricane on July 27, 2003
    Good start, I'm intersted to see what happens next.
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  • From ANON - jo on July 27, 2003
    MORE MOE MORE MORE MORE!!!!!!! Where's the smut? *Peers over the bow of the good ship SS/HG, looking for any sign of smut-land*
    -jo
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  • From ANON - Alanfan on July 27, 2003
    Looks like this could be another good one. But why does Snape want them expelled I thought the idea was to protect Harry by keeping in a safe place ie, Hogwarts, and as Snape is part of the OoP,it's part of his job to protect Harry. Or am I jumping the gun here.
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