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Reviews for hermione sandwich

By : yesenia
  • From ANON - CrossworldNoMiko on July 29, 2003
    Was it as good for you as it was for me? ^_^
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  • From ANON - dinabugg on July 29, 2003
    Well...I usually read an entire story before I review. I'm trying my hardest not to flame you. Just to let you know. I read your first chapter. You need a beta. Not for spelling or grammar as far as I can see. But, if you're going to depart that much from canon, you need to warn people and you need a better set-up. Just dropping it iere ere casually will cause reactions similar to mine. You'll make people stop reading, right then and there.
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  • From ANON - Annison on July 29, 2003
    This was actually really well done! Just enough plot along with the good stuff! Great work!
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  • From ANON - observer on July 29, 2003
    Since Harry was into girls and Draco was into men perhaps Harry should've entered Hermoine via the front and Draco from Behind?
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  • From ANON - Nell on July 28, 2003
    Oh don't be so hard of yourself! a non-plot story is good from time to time. And you just gave me a bonus! threesomes are not very comon!

    :D
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