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Reviews for Outside the Fire

By : moonglow
  • From ANON - Ann on January 03, 2005
    Found your story by accident. But I enjoyed it very much!! I hope you update soon, because I am curious to see what all of the Gryf/Slyth couples are up to!
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  • From ANON - Shiro Ryu on September 12, 2004
    I started reading this at Whispers. I am so glad that you have been updating the story here. I really, really hope you finish this story! I love your writing! ^_^
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  • From ANON - Meg on June 14, 2004
    hehe I liked the ending to that chapter, I can't wait for the next ones, I love how long they are its so great!!! Anyway, gives me more of an excuse not to study for finals, and for that I thank you ever so deeply. lol. please keep it up, I love this fic, as it was like, the third HP fic i've ever read, and by now, I've tread a TON. Stil love this one more though. I can't wait for the update!!
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  • From ANON - revel_in_me on April 29, 2004
    So very pleased to see your writing again,
    Thanks for a great chapter. I can't help but love the characters you create.
    -Cheers :)
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  • From ANON - Bambu on April 29, 2004
    For some reason I've missed several of your updates, and this has built beautifully. It's got humor and pathos and everything in between. That he threw out his back is just hysterical!
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 21, 2004
    I love this fic.

    Just wondering have you given up on it, because i have been checking for updates for a few weeks, and there hasnt been any.

    If you have finished this fic and its on a diffrent site could you please let me know?

    You could post it on Wiktt.

    Thanx.
    M.


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  • From ANON - moony_reader on March 19, 2004
    Oh gosh I loved this! It was absolutely fabulous! What a perfect combination of humor, friendship, love and sex. I especially loved this scenes with Draco and Harry. Your portrayl of their relationswas was so much better than a lot that I've read. Most of them involve so much drama and pain, it was really nice that for once Draco and Harry seemed innocently happy with their entire lives ahead of them. And I thought I was a stroke of geneou hav have Snape resign from Hogwarts, thus making it pretty much risk-free for him to get together with Hermione (if he was fired it wouldn't really matter would it).

    And lastly, I loved how you stayed true to Hermione's character and made her a strong woman. Hexing Harry and punching Corner werfinifinitely things that Rowling's Hermione would do. I loved that she stood up for herself and I also loved that this was a lot different than most Hermione/Snape fics in that, Hemione wasn't this submissive, virginal school girl and Snape wasn't this controlling bastard who got off on her age. You definitely helped to give their relationship integrity when you had Snape meet Hermione's father. Excellent work in every way! Please keep writing stories on this site.
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  • From ANON - YellowFairie on February 23, 2004
    Yay! FINALLY! It's about freaking time they got it on like snow monkies trying to keep warm!

    Loved that chapter!

    PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE HURRY WITH THE NEXT!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Susan on February 20, 2004
    I love this story and am so glad you updated! But I have to agree with another reviewer: I have no idea what Michael Corner said to Snape to make him(and everyone else) so upset. Just a little thing really....the most recent chapter is wonderful! Update soon.
    Susan
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  • From ANON - meg on February 18, 2004
    ::claps and cheers:: woo hoo!! an update! I'm so happy!! Anyway, this was a gerat chapter!! It was so hot!! Very nice plan at the dance by the way, Ginnys so cool!! The Harry Draco thing was bloody hilarious! Youre doing a eally nice job mate, keep it up and write more!!!!
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  • From ANON - Blackrose on February 18, 2004
    This is a great story. Hope Harry doesn't get too many probs. I'm getting confused though. Maybe you can help me. I've read upto chapter eight but I'm really confused as to what Corner could've called Severus to insult him so badly. Could you please clear this up for me. Hope to see more.
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  • From ANON - Deb >^..^<  on December 31, 1919
    Chapter 12... I guess that Harry learned the hard way that it's not nice to mess with Hermione Granger!!! That was BRILLIANT & she was the last person that I would have thought to be a suspect!!!

    I VERY MUCH ENJOYED how you got Severus & Hermione together, very well written!!! I look forward to seeing how things go between them now ttheythey have been intimate?!? I hope he doesn't do anything to mess this up!!! Can't wait to see what happens next!!! Til chapter 14, Deb >^..^
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  • From ANON - Deb >^..^< . on January 05, 2004
    Read chapters 10 & 11..... WHO cursed Harry? I know that Harry & Draco's timing was bad, but at least they had a good reason!!! Can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter!!! Deb >^..^
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  • From ANON - HERMIONEANDSEVERUS4EVA! on December 12, 2003
    great story, luv it evil cliffie!!! only found a few errors typos etc minor really. ur story's going great kudos 2 u :) im begging u, plz email me when u update (and thank u) longer review later (like when maybe u post another chappie ;) *sigh, a pathetic attempt to blackmail an author is no good....too bad*
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  • From ANON - Estrilda on November 16, 2003
    Okay -terrific story - although way not long - update, update, update, Please???
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