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Reviews for Outside the Fire

By : moonglow
  • From ANON - Laura on October 09, 2003
    OMG, this is brilliant! I'm having a wonderful time giggling at Snape and Hermione. You weave a wonderful plot; much better than just a quick fling. I can't wait until the next chapter is posted!
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  • From ANON - Meg on September 21, 2003
    You're chapters are awesome, I can't believe you can write so much! It's amazing! I am really looking forward to the next one, and so are my two friends Jen and Hil so if you want up to love you forever please write more smut!! We absolutely love it!! Its like, I print it out and read it at school and its so fun to do during my totally boring classes!! Don't worry, I dont show it to anyone but them and I don't ever tell anyone it's mine, so its safe!! I LOVE IT!!!!! MORE PLEEEEAASSSEEE!!!!! Leaving me hanging! Need more!! You're the best!!! We should start a fanclub...lol!!!
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  • From ANON - Virtual256 on September 17, 2003
    Very well written, I'm eagerly awaiting more.

    Virtual
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  • From ANON - YellowFairie on September 16, 2003
    Ooooh... That's so cute... This whole story is really cute... I love it.

    PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE HURRY WITH THE NEXT CHAPTER!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Pixi on September 16, 2003
    rather liked this one. Kept me chuckling.
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  • From ANON - Laerai on September 15, 2003
    Its the little details in this story that I love. I *knew* the salsa dancing would come back somehow. And the chocolate. I'm waiting to see what will happen with cig detail... and the shirts! I laughed so hard my roomates thought something was wrong! Thanks so much! ^_^

    Keep writing,

    Laerai
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  • From ANON - Gin on September 12, 2003
    ...ch. 4..hot. damnit. i'm being reduced to squish! >< tsk tsk.
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  • From ANON - Gin on September 12, 2003
    LEGILMENCY!?!?! AAHHh!! NEXT NEXT NEXT!!! =o
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  • From ANON - Gin on September 12, 2003
    mm, and chapter two wat. it. i'm so excited to read about how they hook up hermione.from a tip-off(and its completely obvious..er, to me) that she ends up with snape, which is her best match in the world HELLO!, but i've never seen the friends hook them up. ugh. i can't wait. *goes on to read more*
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  • From ANON - Gin on September 11, 2003
    damn....this fic is so good. and..they're all in character! =O your snape makes me all...k. i have to go on to chapter 2 now.
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  • From ANON - BeautifullyMalicious on September 11, 2003
    This story is so good! The humour is great and I actually had tears well up when it was revealed that Corner thought that Severus was totally unwanted. Please, emailwhenwhen you update.
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  • From ANON - Brina on September 11, 2003
    Moonglow:
    You are my hero. The moon i nig night sky, the pork in my bean, the sugar in my coolaid. I absolutely love this story. I would grind it into a powder and snort it if i could. Please give us some more chapters!! --Brina
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  • From ANON - YellowFairie on September 10, 2003
    Woo Hoo. Go Hermione!

    Lovely chapter..

    Please hurry with the next!
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  • From ANON - MissCrystalix on September 10, 2003
    erm... what exactly WAS the 20th item? something unwanted? but there are MILLIONS of things that are entirely unwanted, like AIDS and lonelyness or Athlete's Foot
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  • From ANON - elementaldeity on September 10, 2003
    I really like your idea of pairings and the attractions between. Always looking for updates.
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