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Reviews for Outside the Fire

By : moonglow
  • From SNAPESANGEL1991 on October 28, 2019

    wish you had wrote more like what poppys reaction was to all this and other things but i loved it

     


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  • From Lonerider70 on July 03, 2013
    I enjoyed reading this story very much. I hope you write more of Hermione and Severus after they get to her parents.
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  • From Tanya on May 15, 2009
    I fully loved this story :) but I can't believe anyone could think Snape unwanted... that's just plain mean
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  • From genna on January 27, 2008
    Moonglow,
    I have only tried to write one story. I got to chapter 8 and lost my muse and inspiration. Taking my expierence for what it is worth, here's my read on your ending...

    You stopped the story in a place where I think it really became interesting. I can see if the story you wanted to tell was Hermione meets the real Severus and they fall in love deciding to face/overcome the odds, then the romance is in the acquiring and maintaining. Cool. But you took the HP universe to altered world that gives H/S the possibility of a life long world of chances and possibilities. By standing up to the uber lord Dumbledore and general standards of decency (most middle to high school teachers 'dating' their students are subject to a lot more than Dumbledore's judgement), you opened up the doors for H/S standing up for a new wizarding world. You implicated so many new storylines all in the same thread of your story: Harry and Draco take up the cause. Ronald and Millie stage a revolt during graduation alongside all the Weasleys. Ginny and Blaise set the whole school aflame with indignation through Madame Pomprey and staffers who question the orthodoxy.

    Pivotal. Fresh. Ripe for exploration.

    If you were tired of the story or said what you already wanted/needed to say, COOL BEANS. If not, revisit this because I can't believe that them fighting the good fight is all they would do in face of Hermione possibly not receiving a finishing degree from Hogwarts or not being able to go into her future career as healer at St. Mungo.

    For what it is worth
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  • From amd2175 on January 10, 2008
    I agree! You must absolutely write a sequel!!! I LOVED this story! trust me its hard to get me to love a story...I LOVE EVIL ALBUS!! YES! The worst thing a person can do is make people think what they are doing is for love and not their own personal advantages.
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  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on January 04, 2008
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From NutsAboutHarry on December 31, 2007
    I really really really like this story! Please tell me there will be a sequel including loads of shagging and kids? Email me at ratscentral@hotmail.com if there is a continuation!

    Great work!

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  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on July 02, 2007
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - Lisa on December 30, 2006
    This story is very addictive... please i know it has been FOREVER since you updated but please try to atleast put up an epilogue or sequal!
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 09, 2006
    The remainder of this story can be found at http://moonglow11066.livejournal.com/tag/outside+the+fire
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 22, 2005
    great story. really loved it all the tension (sp?) anyway please update soon.
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  • From ANON - Meg on October 24, 2005
    YAY YOU UPDATED!! I'm so excited! Please keep writing more and more chapters, I can't wait to see what happens next!! Please update again real soon!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - unperfectwolf on May 18, 2005
    wow. just as good the next time around. and of course, leaves me wanting more just as much :).
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  • From ANON - bloodsugar on May 09, 2005
    this is the first time i read your fic, stumbled upon it really while randomly going through this site, looking for anything hermione-related. i enjoyed reading your story, it's very well-written. it's actually a very refreshing change from a lot of the fics i've read, and i can see you really put a lot of care into crafting each chapter. please do update soon! :)
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  • From ANON - silver on April 22, 2005
    i don't get it...what did corner say?? I mean all i got was that he said that snape was the last item....
    enlighten me please!!
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