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Reviews for Falling

By : FindingYesterday
  • From ANON - RandH4ever on January 06, 2005
    Ron/??? So who was the girl?
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  • From ANON - alex on August 01, 2003
    i think you might want to say who these charactors are because now it's kinda confusing, and why are they so depressed? mabey add a little more background. right now it sounds like a poem, was that the intent? if you want it to be more story-like, then you need to add more detail, and explain a little more. you'd make a great poet by the way...
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  • From shelia on July 30, 2003
    Alright, I thought the story poignant and bittersweet. I liked the ambiguity of the characters. I had trouble reading it as it seemed to run together (I have a thing about sturcture) If you want a more constructive review I am afriad I am not the righrsonrson for this but I do think the gist was very creative.
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  • From ANON - Taffy on July 30, 2003
    Who is this story about?? I have no constructive criticism, save for the fact that, when you write a story, I think you should at least *mention* who it's about.
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