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Reviews for Hermione\'s true love

By : Witchcraft
  • From ALANRICKMANFAN21 on October 11, 2010
    was the cat Crookshanks that was killed murdered like that? and who's were the blood are on the white curterns in the great hall?? HOW are they gonna catch the person(s) who is/are doing all these sick things??
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  • From ALANRICKMANFAN21 on October 11, 2010
    will there be more to this story?? who's cats was killed murdered and left there like that??
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  • From ALANRICKMANFAN21 on October 11, 2010
    ahhhhhh snape really goes love hermione!! bless him!!!!!!
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  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on April 16, 2008
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

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  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on July 06, 2007
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - tiffany on December 13, 2005
    hey very great story u should keep writting to it. i enjoy these types of stories best.
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  • From ANON - SataiDelenn on August 13, 2005
    ACK! Don't leave me hanging!!!! Please upload the next chater(s)!!!!!!!! I want to see what happens next!
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  • From ANON - MyEmeraldEyes on July 03, 2005
    This is interesting, I can't wait to find out what happens next. Keep up the good work. Also if you are looking for a beta, I am avalible.
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  • From ANON - darkangelsnape on March 26, 2005
    hey great so far keep going plez
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  • From ANON - noway on November 10, 2004
    I like it really much. Is Hermione pregnant? :) Please go on writing the story.
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  • From ANON - Tanya Lake on August 31, 2003
    Hey I really like this story. i cant wait to see what happens at there wedding!
    Tanya
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  • From ANON - Anarane on August 22, 2003
    poor hermione
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  • From RickyRoo on August 14, 2003
    May I ask how old you are? You've got potential to turn this into a good story if you plan it out better and add some more emotion and character developement. Everyone just seems to be acting like they are a part of a 5 year old's imagination. Perhaps you should pay more attentio oto other writers and see how their stories develope over time.
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  • From ANON - arcee on August 10, 2003
    Neat story so far write more soon..
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  • From ANON - One Demonic Angel on August 10, 2003
    Ok I hate to say this but I really think that you need to take a second look at the story and start over. There are so maontrontradiction in it that it isn't making any sense.
    For instance if Voldemort is going to question Severus' loyality then why would he instantly turn around and reward him by giving him Hermione to have his way with?
    Also not even Malfoy would turn on other Slytherins by taking them to be used as entertainment at a Deatheater's meeting. Muggle born students I could see that happening to but they wouldn't even be allowed into Slytherin to begin with.
    You do have a good idea here and I give you credit for it but you may wish to look at the story again from a reader's view and not as a writer. Don't try to rush through everything so quickly, if the quality is good then people will definatly be willing to wait to see what happens and when.

    Sincerely
    Demonic Angel
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