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Reviews for Hermione\'s true love

By : Witchcraft
  • From ANON - mariteri on August 08, 2003
    Hope you get well soon.
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  • From ANON - Jessicat1982 on August 07, 2003
    this is a definate improvement from your other stories, however I still think it needs a little work. as I've said before, you have a wonderful imagination but you needworkwork a bit on character development. try focusing a little more on their inner dialogue. what they're feeling about what is happening and what is currently motivating them to behave that way. not only will it make your story longer, but it will greatly improve the quality. over all I thought it was a really good effort. you're getting much better and I'm glad that you're still trying to write. you can only improve from here. I'm confident that one day soon, you'll be writing a story that everyone will love, you just need a little technical work.
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  • From ANON - Redone on August 07, 2003
    This is in SERIOUS need of some spell-checking, and you could do with some advice plot-wise. Really you should take the previous reviewer's offer.
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  • From RickyRoo on July 30, 2003
    Have you got a chapter ready to post yet? If you would like me to beta some, you can e-mail me at rickmaniac_roo@hotmail.com

    Or, if you'd like to take a look at some of my work first (and decide whether or not you approve of it) he he, I've posted a few Snape fics you'll probably like!

    Just click on my User Name :)
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