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Reviews for Harry Potter and War Against the Order

By : MashellBerry
  • From ANON - rabbit on August 02, 2003
    yet another great chapter this one cleared up some of my many questions and i think that i finally figured out who everyone was, by the way were was Gemini last chapter. you want a war you have one all we need is some "friendlyrms.rms. Muhahahaha
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  • From ANON - rabbit on August 02, 2003
    ahhh and so the plot thickens. i am starting to get confused about who all these people are. and no that is wrong just wrong you should never never NEVER like c. over all the story is just peachy
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  • From ANON - Kimbra-fire on August 02, 2003
    Well, I'm guessing that Luthor won't be in the story in the near future. So I think that Harry would be pretty good together with Alex and not Draco since there's been too many stories pairing him with Harry. But if Ron is in on what Dumbledore is trying to do to Harry, wouldn't Hermione be in on it too? Or maybe not since she is a muggleborn. I liked the part when Harry and the Dursleys captured Devon, and it goes to show that the Dursleys aren't bastards to Harry in every story that they're in! LOL
    =^-^= Keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - Julie on August 02, 2003
    I'm enjoying this so far. I'm a Harry/Draco fanatic, so I'd love it if you got them together... update soon, please!
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  • From ANON - Lakoma on August 02, 2003
    This story is really decent, but I would like to suggest that you seek out a beta to help with your sentences, misspellings and misuse of some words. I, personally, find it throws me off when I read only because I've been a secretary for so many years (and had an english major for a mother!). While I like reading what you've written, I find myself mentally correcting you mistakes. Forgive me if it sounds harsh--it's not meant to be anything more than constructive and I do hope that you'll continue writing.

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  • From ANON - Kimbra-fire on August 01, 2003
    I'm really enjoying this story from the beginning to now, but I can't help but ask if Luthur will come back. I kinda thought that he would have been the vampire and not Alex. But I like how the plot is going though, keep up the good work! =^-^=
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  • From ANON - rabbit on August 01, 2003
    i love it, i tell you, love it. you have me hanging on to every word. please... update... soon... make... rabbit... verry-verry-verry happy *run around screaming and pulling out hair* need next chapter! humpf! i hate cliffhangers.
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  • From ANON - rabbit on August 01, 2003
    you asked for me to review every chapter so well here i am along with some constructive criticism, of course,
    the entire quidditch team knows the truth about shall we say harry's problem? and you forgot our dear old Snape.
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  • From ANON - rabbit on August 01, 2003
    oh! what fun this fic is great and you are right in saying that the first chapter really doesn't do the fic
    justice. very interesting making half the town magical. quite tastey. and yes I am evil o so EVIL!
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  • From ANON - Ja\'Nice on July 31, 2003
    I really like this story.

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  • From ANON - rabbit on July 31, 2003
    tisk tisk your spellis wos wonderful! very interesting all seems well but your crazed fans need more chapters
    wahahahaha!!! sorry i'm in a very evil mood
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  • From lynntownsend on July 31, 2003
    Yummy!
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