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Reviews for Lord Snape\'s Dilemma

By : Avrild

From ANON - ShagsTheDustmop on September 12, 2003
An excellent end to an excellent story :)
I'm glad Hermione was able to demonstrate to Snape that women are perfectly capable of la petit mort :)
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From ANON - Andrian on September 12, 2003
Bravo...twas excellent...definitely a different type of story but you did a sb job job!
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From ANON - Lola on September 11, 2003
excellent job. of your stories this is one of my favorites. i really enjoyed this version of severus, mainly cause i related to his inability to trust/ fear of intamicy. i am very relieved that you allowed him to live. and that they managed to resolve their problems! wonderful story, nicely done!
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From ANON - amethyst on September 11, 2003
What a wonderful story! The thing I hate most about great stories is that they must end. Unfortunately, everything has an ending. I promise that if you post an epilogue I will read it. It is a great way to postpone the end of story. Please keep writing!
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From ANON - Lola on September 10, 2003
you simply cannot let Severus die. if he dies i don't know what i'll do!! i really enjoy this story, excellently written, very good! keep up the good work, let severus live [viva la severus!].
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From ANON - yasmine on September 07, 2003
So sorry wasn't quite finished and accidentally sent the same review twice. Well now I'm an idiot...what else is new? (cultured self taking over....there are a lot of people in her head, believe you me!!!(what does this mean?)) Oh yes, darling, love, ab fab, and all, though I do believe they had buttons since they are easier to conceal than huge floppy dic-shipe-I mean-DRAWSTRINGS!!!!!(looks around at people staring, then "snicker snicker giggle snort chortle chuckle hee hee hee"(also had 4 servings of ice cream that was to die for GRANDESSA VERY CHERRY CHOCOLATe CHIP....YUM!)) as in your question about them in the sex scene...mmm yes quite delight-full. Purrrrrrrrfect. Please continue A!! P!! PLEASE!!! For the sake of humanity and all that is well and good(especially ice cream) you MUST continue. thank you for your time.Good night. Off to drool at Adrian Brody porn-Shipe!I keep doing this!-MODELING PHOTOS, YES MODELING PHOTOS!!!(snicker snicker giggle snort)

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From ANON - yasmine on September 07, 2003
OMGOMGOMG! (snicker snicker giggle snort) you-are-fantc-omc-omigosh-I-am-absolutely-jealous-of-your-wit-and-capabilities-you-gave-me-a-fricking-girl-boner-and-I-thought-I-was-mentally-climaxing-for-a-second-or-two(big inhalation of air)though-I-must-admit-your-way-of-killing-Alan-shipe-I-mean-Snape-was-quite-inappropriate-though-everything-else-was-just-"Marvelous, darling.Marvelous!"(second big inhalation)BTW-shipe-is-plural-in-my-family-for-sheep-but-it-makes-interesting-swears-let-alone-sweaters-(It's really late, I just finished reading what you have written so far,really, hyper, @ a friends house, and I'm very pun-friendly)(snicker snicker giggle snort)(big exhalation, then inhalation)NOOOOOOERUSERUS SNAPE MUST NOT DIE AND HERMY AND SEV AND THE OTHER COUPLES LIKE GIN AND HAIR MUST HAVE LOTS O' CHILDREN DAMMIT! SORRY, I DON"T SWEAR TOO MUCH IN WRITING BUT I MEAN IT...YEAH< I WAS GONNA DO IT AGAIN< BUT I'D HAVE TO COME UP WITH A NEW EXCUSE OR 5 BAGILLION (note to self: stop pressing the durn shift key, makes me look like I'm deaf or sommmat)

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From ANON - yasmine on September 07, 2003
OMGOMGOMG! (snicker snicker giggle snort) you-are-fantastic-omigosh-I-am-absolutely-jealous-of-your-wit-and-capabilities-you-gave-me-a-fricking-girl-boner-and-I-thought-I-was-mentally-climaxing-for-a-second-or-two(big inhalation of air)though-I-must-admit-your-way-of-killing-Alan-shipe-I-mean-Snape-was-quite-inappropriate-though-everything-else-was-just-"Marvelous, darling.Marvelous!"(second big inhalation)BTW-shipe-is-plural-in-my-family-for-sheep-but-it-makes-interesting-swears-let-alone-sweaters-(It's really late, I just finished reading what you have written so far,really, hyper, @ a friends house, and I'm very pun-friendly)(snicker snicker giggle snort)(big exhalation, then inhalation)NOOOOOO-SEVERUS SNAPE MUST NOT DIE AND HERMY AND SEV AND THE OTHER COUPLES LIKE GIN AND HAIR MUST HAVE LOTS O' CHILDREN DAMMIT! SORRY, I DON"T SWEAR TOO MUCH IN WRITING BUT I MEAN IT...YEAH< I WAS GONNA DO IT AGAIN< BUT I'D HAVE TO COME UP WITH A NEW EXCUSE OR 5 BAGILLION (note to self: stop pressing the durn shift key, makes me look like I'm deaf or sommmat)

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From ANON - alexial on September 06, 2003
excellent story!! i am no longer subscribed to wiktt, so when you next update, please email me! i cannot wait to find out what happens to severus, and everything else. i hope he lives, obviously and that malfoy dies, and that hermione nd severus's marriage works out. cannot wait for more!
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From ANON - Andrian on September 04, 2003
Wow that was brilliant. I find myself enthralled and dare I say even liking this type of genre. You have written this excellently.
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From ANON - amethsyt on September 04, 2003
What an evil cliffhanger at the end. Will anxiously await the next chapter.

Also, noticed that you have been posting this on FFnet and will be adding this to my favorites list!

You put a wonderous amount of research inour our stories. Should you ever publish an original story please send me an email so that I may be the first in line at the bookstore.
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From filthkitten on September 04, 2003
Hrmmmm ..... I always respect any story that is researched extensively, and writ as ungodly well as yours, but I have to say it was a total suprise to find such an 'adult' fanfic here in Smutville - and even more of a suprise that I enjoyed it! VERYVERYVERY well done! You ought to post this in more places - if the sex is a problem, leave it out - the story is good enough all by itself. Masterfully done!

- 'Da Kitten

PS: Peeves is sick enough as is, but fucking a HOUSE ELF? Now thatust ust this side of beastiality. Ew.
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From ANON - amethyst on September 02, 2003
I actually read this last weeen yen you posted it, but didn't get a chance to review. So I wanted to make sure I came back to tell what a wonderful job you are doing with this story. I am anxiously waiting to see how he resolves his problems with Malfoy and Hermione.
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From ANON - Croft on August 31, 2003
Ooh, that's probably the best chapter yet. As much as I was looking forward to the grand romantic reunion, this was better. A disappointing consummating of marriage, an even worse slip of the tongue by Severus, and a temperamental Hermione - it was fan fantastic. And so now Severus will duel Lucius, dear oh dear...
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From ANON - Ezmerelda on August 29, 2003
Oh, dear, there he goes, running off half-cocked! When will Severus learn to stop and think before rushing off?

Great story, thank you for writing!
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