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Reviews for A Secret Worth Keeping

By : RWHandLoraineProductions
  • From BrianChattillon on April 21, 2005
    *Eating Popcorn*
    "Man Sevvie is a lucky bugger. He got a header..........."

    *Cho rolls her eyes*
    "Your just reading this because you hope Riddle gets mauled by ass dwelling lemmings............."

    *Brian shrugs*
    I"I was hoping for Butt Dwelling Monkeys But that's doible if not more painful............."

    *Severus sweatdrops*
    "Hermoine.........I love you I really do..........But why did you invite this psycho again for?"


    *Hermoine smirks*
    "Anti Malfoy device and Voldermort is shit scared of him. Granted no-one can really control him........He even manages to curb Dementors"

    *Severus shrugs*
    "I wondered why Azkabam was so empty? What did they do lock him up in there?"

    *Brian poutoing*n
    "I was visiting and Tormenting Lucius. How was I suposed to know that Barney was a Torture for Dementors as well......."

    *Sreverus shudders*
    "You REALLY need to have therapy for that or Maybe I can obliviate you?
    *Looks Hopefiully at Hermoine*


    *Reveiwing again*
    Urk Nice new chappie I better hop it before Sevie obliviates me into Next Millenia. Keep up the good work and I wish you and yourds God bless!

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  • From Sana on April 18, 2005
    Gadzooks!! Gods u really blew me out of my seat. The plot it's great. Simply out of this world. Please Please Submit in teh rest of the chapters. If you value teh life of your readers. ChaoticMayhem
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  • From ANON - ldf on April 17, 2005
    i just had to tell you that its a stunning chapter.
    done with taste and, i think , enough of a hint of
    what is to come at a later time.

    i believe that Hermione is progressing nicely and
    that Severus is as patient as he can be.

    it is a sweet, bittersweet love story and you're
    keeping in that vein swimmingly.

    brava, darling. wonderful chapter. perhaps they'll
    get easier now. if not, you know where to find me.


    and, as a side note.... ladyevilfaerie is currently
    reading She Said What? so we've sort of met.
    ~snickers~ we're multiplying.

    *hugs*

    ~blessings~
    ldf
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  • From ANON - forge_underhill on April 17, 2005
    when i sat down to read this story i thought to my self " I'll just read a chapter, or two..." yeah....that didn't work very well. Read all of them and sat till 2 am. because your story is AMAZINGLY AWESOME!!!! I love the fact that you gave Snape a feeling-y side,eveyone has one, some just try to bury it very deep inside of them so it won't get hurt. Although I DO miss his beautifully sarcastic remarks. Hopefullythere will be more of them coming up! Keep up the wonderful work! blessed be
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  • From ANON - sevati on April 17, 2005
    I really hate to be all bitch-grammar queen on you, but I thought you might want to know of a incorrect word usage. It might not even by your fault, if my guess that you typed 'obliviated' in correctly, but your spell check said "hell no" and changed it to 'obliterated'. MS Word has done it to me many times, it's nearly as annoying as that damned paper clip. Of course, it always automatically corrects my (mis)spelling of su(r)prise, so I guess I can't bitch too much :)

    obliterate:
    1. To do away with completely so as to leave no trace. See Synonyms at abolish.
    2. To wipe out, rub off, or erase (writing or other markings).
    3. Medicine. To remove completely (a body organ or part), as by surgery, disease, or radiation.

    It's in Albus's second letter, chapter 1. I doubt Albus would be speaking civily to Hermione if she completely removed Snape's memory center, or the like. Lol. Other than that, I love the fic and can't wait to see what will happen next. It's like crack, I tell you! Well, maybe not crack. Hm.. chocolate on PMS? Yeah, that suits better.
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  • From ANON - midnight tiger on April 17, 2005
    oh wow... im waiting for more with baited breath! this was wonderful. he is being so considerate (wish my first had been that sweet) thanks for a wonderful chapter and i look forward to more. thanks for posting!
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  • From ANON - BotticellisAngel on April 16, 2005
    Argh! The evil cliffhanger! Was there ever such an evil monstrocity as a cliffhanger? LOL just kidding. I hope you update soon. I liked that you made her nervous, as opposed to just jumping each other immediately. It was very realistic. I can't wait to see more!
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  • From ANON - Susan on April 16, 2005
    Red, you have done wonderfully. That was actually so sweet. I find it hard to read some "rape" fics and this one was paced perfectly. You didn't sugar coat it, but rather, took two people who were put in a horrible predicament and made the evolving relationship spin out in it's own time. Have loved this story from the beginning and when it is complete I am going to read it from start to finish again. Thanks for keeping up with this and not compromising the story just for early "smut". You're doing great! Hugs, Susan
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  • From ANON - JTBJAB on April 16, 2005
    Man oh man! Severus, so sweet is he! Bless him!

    I can't wait for your next update!
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  • From ANON - mo on April 15, 2005
    I loved it.. it was absolutely AWESOME!!!!!! haha i liked the convo about the penis being a person.. very funny
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  • From ANON - mysticsong1978 on April 15, 2005
    Delightful; look forward to more. Very sweet. I love your take on Severus - and Ron for that matter.
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  • From ANON - Severessa on April 15, 2005
    Whew! Yes! It's getting warmer at my house tonight! I am so glad to see you back, Red, and I hope that all remains well with you, and gets better every day.
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  • From ANON - Wizarding Angel on April 15, 2005
    I spend most of the night rereading this whole fic and loved it a lot. the way you can do this is outstanding and the charaters are so well writen it makes this fic hard to stop reading. and as always keep up with the excelent work.
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  • From ANON - larana on April 15, 2005
    OOOhhhhh I love this story! I like the lemony goodness. Finally together. Ah, sweet satisfaction.
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  • From ANON - June W on April 15, 2005
    Ch 36 - thank you for updating! I don't mind waiting two months for a new chapter - it's better than waiting two years. This story is WONDERFUL, and I'm glad you showed Hermione still struggling to get over the memory of their first time together, which is more realistic than having them just shag right off the bat. I'm glad Severus realized it and slowed down. Now, what can we feed your muse to keep her happy?? [BTW, what things did you "edit" in the previous chapters? Should I re-read the other 35 chapters?]
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