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Reviews for A Secret Worth Keeping

By : RWHandLoraineProductions
  • From MilleniumForever on September 17, 2008
    This was a beautiful story. I couldn't have been happier with how it ended. Thank you for writing such a wonderful tale.


    *cookies shaped like cauldrons and books*


    ~Sophie Max-Anderson

    P.S. I really can't word it any other way. You have a real talent for writing.
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  • From neelix on September 17, 2008
    ahhh... how lovely!!!

    Nicely done. I hope you decide to write more - this was a very engaging tale.
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  • From soldiersgirl0709 on September 17, 2008
    Lovely story, dearest! I enjoyed it very much and will of course look for anything you decide to post in the future.

    Happy Writing!
    S_G
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  • From soldiersgirl0709 on September 15, 2008
    Hi! Sat down and read it all in one sitting. A benefit to being ill, nothing to do but sit =) Love the premise, its a great story and I was thoroughly entertained. I look forward to reading more. =)


    Happy Writing!
    S_G
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  • From genna on September 12, 2008
    This is a harsh critique of this story. I am sure your other writings are spot on. I feel like the moral majority on the right has taken over this HP universe. Does the author want all women-girl and woman-to have every pregnancy go to term? Can you be more explicit? I don't think enough of the characters have told us why having a baby is a good thing to do when you are raped, involved in an incestuous situation, or you just don't think you're ready.

    If only life could follow this easy formulation, where there is a responsible man to step in for every unexpected pregnancy...well I guess at least in this fantasy version, we can put the situation into a plug in formula where 16 year girls can have sex with one or many over 30 or 40 year old men with a happy conclusion. No Aurors or Courts decide to prosecute wrong doers and the law lays in individual hands.
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  • From scotsgirl on September 11, 2008
    I just picked the wrong weasley huh, good for Ginny using her brain. Looking forward to next update
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  • From Utopia on September 11, 2008
    Ooooh! Who's on the inside?? OMG! Its one of the twins?!






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  • From Utopia on September 10, 2008
    Ah ha! A multitasking mother!

    AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW! That's adorable!

    What's up with Ginny? Is there another baby on the way??

    Hogwarts is going to need a creche! lol!
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  • From Utopia on September 10, 2008
    I'm back, Is anyone else mentioning that you can't enlarge the text on the latest chapters without it spreading off the screen? I'm not sure if its my end or not, it's the only fic I'm having bother with.

    Oh, that opening paragraph made me shudder! Oh! Brilliant description!

    Ooooooh! The plot thickens further with Voldie!

    Draco's matured exponentially in your fic! I adore how you've developed him! Its hard to remember he's actually 17 and not a 'proper' adult. Teenagers shouldn't be in their shoes, but they're all coping amazingly well!

    VOLDIESHORTS?! *giggle* That's a good one! lol!

    AWWWWWWW! Ron and Pansy cuteness! If love is so powerful, then I have no doubt that Pansy's little one will live - there's enough love around the new couple to give the baby strength!

    Once again, brilliant.


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  • From Utopia on September 08, 2008
    I will go back and review the rest, there's a lot I can say about the chapters!

    I have to admit, the situation in the chapter was awful! But it brings across just how depraved and delusional Narcissa and Lucius are. The way you have developed their characters is frightening! I really wouldn't want to meet either of them - not without a guard! But, you've kept them constantly nasty, continuity is a good thing in a long fic.

    Draco's timing was impeccable, I wonder if he's in on what was happening or if he really had to go home? Did the DaRats tell him something was wrong? Did Hermione ask for his help? I can't see Draco wanting to go home - not if that's what happens! I don't think how Draco reacted really involved much acting! His performance deserved an Oscar - but I don't think the poor lad was having to stretch the truth much.

    The change of scene was such a contrast! It was a flawless leap from evil into innocence. I have an image of Hermione reading to the baby - even if the little one probably doesn't understand a word! I can't remember as a child a time when someone didn't read me a story at bed time! Reading was a big part of my life even then! Your little domestic scene was so reminiscent of my own childhood.

    To have an obviously traumatised Severus come home and snatch up the baby was adorable, but very telling on his mental state. I'm surprised Sebastian didn't raise the roof at the sudden picking up and hugging! Though, I guess the little boy will sense things even at that tender age.

    A brilliant chapter, even if half of the plot made me shudder in the ickyness! I can't fault the quality that has me reading through the bad to get to the silver lining at the end.

    Now I know where I've heard the phrase! I used to go to school with a lad who was a practicing Wiccan; I haven't seen him in three years since going to uni! I never did ask him what it meant, he was so quiet (when not singing in his band) that I didn't know if I'd offend him by asking!
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  • From Utopia on September 07, 2008
    I don't know what to say!

    I've cried, I've laughed, I've winced and I've smiled that little smile I have when there's something soppy to read.

    This is one heck of a rollercoaster of a fic, and one you should be INCREDIBLY proud of. You do the SS/HG pairing credit and in such a unique and action packed way.

    I wish I had the time to go back and review every 39 chapters! But I'm running around like a blue-arsed fly here trying to sort things for uni! I will come back and review when I have time, this deserves no less!

    A masterpiece, a wonderful fic that's had me hanging on every word!

    ps. I love your name! Its a clever play on words!

    pps. Blessed Be, where does that come from? I've seen the phrase used by a few people, and I was wondering on its origins. I'd look it up on Google, but you never know if what's on the net is true, false or an odd mix of the two. I don't mean to cause any offense by asking, and if I do, then I apologise profusely; I'm just curious.
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  • From neelix on September 07, 2008
    Nice update - glad you are getting around to finishing this :)
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  • From dawnangel on September 05, 2008
    HOLY SHIT. This just keeps getting better and better I can't wait to read more. OH I love how in depth the plot is, it's great.

    give me more please
    dawnangel

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  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on September 05, 2008
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From voraciousreader on September 05, 2008
    Detailed characterizations, plausible motivations, and a healthy respect for your source material--I love it! Brava! More, please?
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