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Reviews for A Secret Worth Keeping

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  • From ANON - kari on December 20, 2004
    i started reading this story out of idle curiousity and boredom. however, it is very well written and addictive. a little ooc but the story line is unique enough and interesting enough to hold my interest, at least long enough for me to read it in one sitting. i am eagerly awaiting the following chapter. my compliments to the author.
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  • From ANON - June W on December 20, 2004
    Ch 33 - THANK YOU for the new chapter!!! Scary, the idea of Lucius still obsessed with Hermione, and even more scary to know that Lucius knows how to use Legilimency. Does Severus know that? If so, Severus might want to teach Occlumency to Hermione and Draco. I can't think of why Lucius forced Severus to rape Hermione, but I'm glad the baby is Severus' and not Lucius' baby - eww! When will Draco find out that it was his father who was ultimately responsible for Sebastian's conception? I think the knowledge of it would make Draco even more determined to protect Sebastian and defeat the Death Eaters. Oooh, I need to read another chapter - please update again soon! Oh, and don't forget Pansy!
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  • From ANON - Davina Icaras on December 10, 2004
    Heya! Just a little update on my own story (and secretly a plea for more chapters ;) ) ; I'm now registered to Fictionpress.com, under Davina Icaras, and that's where i'm going to put my original story, when i finally get around to translating it ;) And no, not my boyfriend is distracting me, other things are happening right now, but i'll find an hour or so to do it soon :D
    So, hope to see y
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  • From ANON - Lu LIng Qi on December 07, 2004
    I must have more of this story
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  • From ANON - Jayne Elizabeth on December 05, 2004
    omg! I loved when severus drank herm's brest milk! that is just SO sexy! do it again! PLEASE!

    god this story is so hot. i cant wait till they do it, you've been drawing it out for so long, when it finally happens its gonna be like "WOOOOO" or "YESSS" or "BOO YA"

    lol

    Jayne Elizabeth
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  • From ANON - DDMalfoy on December 02, 2004
    Chapter 32 finally up? It's been up, or at least you've posted it on another site. I thought this was an update. Please update.
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  • From ANON - cdkobasiuk on November 10, 2004
    This is a really great story. I like the RATS. Good writing.

    cdk
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  • From ANON - MOE on November 06, 2004
    WOW, i am so happy you finally updated,i have been biting my nails waiting for this next, chappie but it was well worth it, THANKS for another great chapter, to this incredibly GREAT story :)
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  • From ANON - Wizarding Angel on November 06, 2004
    I have not read this story in a long time and I have just know finished the rafteafter Ileft it on one of those chapters. I love this story very much and it kinda hits home with me but any well written and as always keep up with the excellent work
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  • From ANON - spaz141 on November 05, 2004
    You are a brilliant writer and I really look forward to reading your work, however...I must make my exit here for this particular fic. I don't wao so start any debate, I just need to back out now and I wish you all the best in completing this story. I will keep an eye out for an update on To Love and To Lose - what are Jessica and Severus up to anyway? Thanks for writing!
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  • From ANON - AnyuBoo on November 05, 2004
    Great chapter...even if it struggled getting out. :) I can hardly wait to see what revenge they'll take on Lucius...and also how Hermione's parents get their come-uppance.
    Now, just a friendly grammar note (please don't take this the wrong way): When denoting posession and the word or name ends in an "s", only an apostrophe is needed, ex: instead of Severus's, it is Severus'; also, and this catches many, many people: "its" is the posessive of it, while "it's" is the contraction of it is. Finally, the school's name is written as Hogwarts, rather than Hogwart's (the posessive would be Hogwarts'). Very, very minor, but I thought you might like to know.
    Looking forward to upcoming chapters...this is a really great story!
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  • From ANON - eve/roarke on November 05, 2004
    I have just read your story, all 32 chapters, I really have no idea how I've missed it before.
    Its great, so special, recently some of the fanfics story lines have been very dark in content,
    so it was a pleasure to find such a enchanting story.

    I'm hoping Pancy comes to the right decision for her, as one of my special friends would say
    so mote it be.

    Blessed be, update soon.
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  • From on November 05, 2004
    Wow!! I love it, it has so much emotion in it that it makes me cry sometimes! ^_^ Please continue it!!
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  • From ANON - Davina Icaras on November 04, 2004
    Heya! After a long day at work, finally a new chapter to read in bed! Severus and Hermione are really getting a real relationship now, and i like it! Hermoine is now really taking care of Pansy, and Severus is doing his best to help her, the darling :grin: I enjoyed reading about Hermoine's feelings, and how she and Severus are coping with seeing each other in classes, although i think that they won't keep it up for long ;p

    And yes, my boyfriend is still distracting me, i've told him to stop so he gives me regular times to write, which i always manage to double :grin:
    Because i'm busy with other stuff, my muse has decided to leave me for the moment, so i'm afraid you'll have to wait for my fic ..
    I
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  • From ANON - jessica on November 04, 2004
    wow,this story is so great!i just read the whole thing!oh,i can't wait to read more!coming from a young mother(i was 21 when i had my liam)well,that's not so young compared to today.i don't agree with abortion personally, but i think that you should have the right, if you want it.it's nice to see pansy so sweet.did you get the d'lacour name in the story from fleur in GOF?KEEP WRITING!
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