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Reviews for A Secret Worth Keeping

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  • From ANON - Ginny the slut on September 03, 2004
    So good, I could die waiting for you to upidate, Please make it soon, such a good story
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  • From ANON - Davina Icaras on September 01, 2004
    Hey I was just wandering around the site, waiting for the next chapter, and couldn't resist posting another review :D I forgot about the edit of chapter 29, and just wanted to say that it indeed is a better chapter now :D And I was just wondering; how did you find the name for Severus' bird? I usually have a horrible time coming up with names for familiars, so I thought I'd ask you for your source ;) And also an update from my fic; I've started translating it, but I think it'll take some time... Mostly because I now have someone new in my life to distract me, and he's doing far too well a job in it, if you know what I mean :grin: So, I'm looking forward to reading some more, it always makes my day! :D Love, and blessed be, Davina
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  • From ANON - pixi on August 27, 2004
    gah you somehow managed to sneak updates past me!

    Great job. I love how this is turning out. I adore DaRats....
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  • From ANON - firestarter on August 27, 2004
    beautiful chapter. severus's emotions and care were extreemly well written. Good job:)
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  • From ANON - moe on August 04, 2004
    GOD i love it, the last chapter was great!!!! I LOVE IT!!! can i say it enough............ MORE PLEASE!!!
    :)
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  • From ANON - M on July 29, 2004
    Holy Cows!! How did I miss this many chapters? But it's a nice surprise and made for a nice afternoon of reading. Your Hermione has more control than I would have. LOL Great work I can't wait for the rest.
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  • From ANON - vania on July 29, 2004
    My Dear you have a FANTASTIC story!!!! You are a genius and your writing is great! Please up data as soon as you can! I'm at loss at word to express how much i love your story... I'm sorry, but i can not do the spelling correctly, being portuguese nor can i be of great importance, but i do want to say thank you for your work, it's the best i've read in months.
    love vania
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  • From ANON - quartz on July 29, 2004
    Very nice and realistic!!!! ;-)
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  • From ANON - PotionsMistressM on July 26, 2004
    Oh, you and your semantics! Bitch, bastard... I'm an equal opportunity swearer!

    Anyway, the chapter... All I can say is that it was truly BEAUTIFUL! I literally had to stop reading when Severus was asking her to come to his bed because I was so overcome! That section was so, so beautiful, and (BIG compliment - pr- probably the biggest I could ever give) it reminded me SO, SO much of Erik from "The Phantom of the Opera!" It was SO, SO, SO good- he's so needy in so many ways! Oh, God! I want a Severus of my very own!

    Wow. Cold shower time. Honestly, this was just so... breathtaking.

    Will you marry me?

    Oh, wait. I'm already betrotto Gto GrrArrg. But I love you anyway!

    More soon, PLEASE!!!
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  • From ANON - Davina Icaras on July 25, 2004
    Another great chapter! I wish I had a guy who was that romantic to me! *sigh* And thank you for the candles, I thought it might come back in this kinda way...
    Snape is really a true man of his word, and i really loved reading this chapter! I cant wait till the next chapter, but i've got enough work for my current fic to keep me busy :D We're drawing to the end, and i'll try to translate it to English but i'm afraid it'll take a while since i'm on holiday from August the 2nd to the 16th. But the upside of that is offcource being able to read a lot of new chapters from al the fics i'm reading :D So, till the next time and have fun writing,
    love and blessed be, Davina
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  • From ANON - ancientgirl on July 25, 2004
    That was a very sweet last chapter. I'm glad they are at least sharing the same bed. She can see that he really does care about her and is taking her needs into consideration before his. Of course he faltered a little bit there but only because he wants her so badly, but he stopped when she said so and that is part of the trust they are building. Can't wait for the next update.
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  • From ANON - rainasnape on July 25, 2004
    Oh I worship the very ground you walk on now. Loved that candle thing it was wonderful. *nudges Hermione* She needs to loosen up a bit...But that chapter was great *claps*
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  • From ANON - spaz141 on July 25, 2004
    Very nice and I think realistic. I did keep thinking that there was no way Sebastian is sleeping through the night already - I kept waiting for him to cry and stop things. Its better that they stopped things on their own though.

    On a personal note - had my baby on the 16th, he's a boy. 2 girls and 2 boys for me...I am so done.
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  • From ANON - June W on July 25, 2004
    Ohhhhh ... I love this chapter! So sweet, so tender, so loving -- he's doing exactly the right thing, going slowly with her. I am SO glad they're in bed together, finally! Without the baby, Ron, Harry, Draco, DaRats, anyone else. My only complaint is that the chapter ended, so please update soon! (Not to be an "arncbair writer," but I hope she stays in his bed every night from now on.)
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  • From ANON - severessa on July 22, 2004
    Ah yes!!! Severus and candlelight...One cannot have a better visual than that! I like the way their relationship is developing, also. This is such a very cool story!
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