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Reviews for A Secret Worth Keeping

By : RWHandLoraineProductions
  • From ANON - Deb >^..^< . on May 25, 2004
    I am so very glad that you (& your muse) are back, I have missed your story!!!
    Part 27, Chapter twenty-five: Fate or Destiny...

    I do hope that there will soon come a time that Hermione does want to begin to get closer to Severus in the physical sense!!! I don't mean that they have to jump in the sack, but for her to want to begin wanting his touch & then become comfortable with the thought of more & then.... later on they can jump in the sack;-) In all honesty I know that when they finally do share each other you will make it BEAUTIFUL!!!

    Speaking of beautiful, the scene with Severus & Sebastian was REMARKABLY BEAUTIFUL!!! Him holding & singing to his son, wanting to spend time with him & Hermione happening in on it was so touching!!! I think that the lullaby you chose was PERFECT!!!

    I am glad to see that Severus referred to Harry & Ron as Sebastian's 'uncles'*
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  • From ANON - azulkan2 on May 25, 2004
    Bad writer! pout, pout! A dang cliffy, after waiting so long for an update. You stinker you! Great chapter but really looking forward to more very soon...please.
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  • From ANON - ancientgirl on May 25, 2004
    Woful ful chapter. I can't get that image of Severus feeding his baby out of my head, it just sounded so lovely. I hope you can update more regularly and that you have been able to get your things settled. I know sometimes RL has a tendancy to kick us in the ass. But, you wrote a great chapter to make up for the long time between updates. I really can't wait for the next chapter though, since Hermione is going to be pissed.
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  • From ANON - ancientgirl on May 25, 2004
    You know I really love this story but this is the 3rd or 4th time you have posted this on top without updating a thing. Do you have a new chapter?
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  • From ANON - hermionefan on May 19, 2004
    ohhhhhhhhhhhh, really, i just looooooveeeee your story!!!!!!!!!!!!
    Please update soon....
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  • From ANON - Ashley on May 12, 2004
    Another great chapter! I can't wait for more. :)
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  • From Lanamanckir on May 08, 2004
    This is a great story! interesting turn of events with the DARATs LOL! Well I hope you update soon.
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  • From ANON - Phantasia on May 08, 2004
    I really am enjoying this story please update soon

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  • From ANON - palkitty on May 05, 2004
    I just read the story and it's been keeping me on edge. I really liked the part with snape in the quiditch store and the RAT meeting. That was just perfect. I cracked up laughing when he uncovered himself.
    ~pal
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  • From ANON - nesscafe on May 04, 2004
    HOT DAMN a new chapter! Woo Hoo! And it's not even my birthday yet! That would be the 16th! ;c) Bummer bout the computer probs, but I'm so thrilled about the chapter! Interesting idea about having liason thn the other Houses! I really like the new name DaRAT! That was a cool combination! More please! More!
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  • From on May 02, 2004
    That, my dear Writing Hood, was EXTREMELY well written. Encore, I say, encore.
    After reading the tale written so far, I felt I simply HAD to commend you, on both your writing, and the story you spun.
    You have a firm grasp of the language (it is excellent), and your story is written in such a way that one does not have to waste time deciphering the grammatical errors, spelling etc.(Which by by the way, very frustratin
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    There aren't many fics that are written so well that the reader could actually concentrate on the plot, and find the reading so easy, and with a flowing structure. Yours is such a fic, and for this I thank and applaud you.
    "A Secret Worth Keeping" was a satisfying read. Your characters were believable and very much 'in-character', the tale was plausible, and the ideas were interes.
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    As well as being imaginative, I found your fic to be an all-round good read.
    I look forward to the next chapter.
    Admiringly, Cerise.
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  • From ANON - illnevertell on April 30, 2004

    I cant tell you how much I am loving this story. It is absolutely wonderful. I read all 26 chapters in one sitting. I couldn't stop.It is incredible and I got so absorbed in it. I cant wait to read more of it. I hope you will post more chapters soon. This really is one of best fics I have ever read, and I have read a ton.
    You have a genuine talent and I hope you will continue to share your work with us. * kudos * I really love the way you have made Draco into a good guy without being Too good. He still has that cocky malfoy attitude but under it he is becoming his own man. I always hoped that in the end Draco Malfoy could find redemption. I think you have shown it is a possibility in a way that is in keeping with the nature of a slytherin. Devious but not truly evil.

    ~ Jaimie ~
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  • From ANON - SamiJo on April 18, 2004
    I loved the story, I cant wait to read what happens next. PLEASE HURRY!!!
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  • From ANON - MeganAnn on April 12, 2004
    Lovelovelovelovelovelove!!!!!!!!!!!! LOVE! That last scene was so cute. SO. CUTE. So cute. I loved it. I have to go read it again or else I would praise you more, but, alas, I must go read more. MORE! I want more. Lol. Very excelently done chapter, very nice, very nice. Lol. Keep up the fantastical work. It was loved. As you can see. I'm rambling.... lol.
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  • From ANON - Midnight Tiger on April 12, 2004
    WONDERFUL chapter as always. I liked his reference to Moses ahe che comparisons made there, and the scene with Severus and Hermione was perfect, and honest and very insightful. i have always loved the way you write the interactions in you story, its so real, and true to life. meetmeeting of DaRat was a wonderful success and i really enjoyed the switching of houses bit. and found it VERY funny that Severus had to take control of the meeting after Dumbledore lost control. :) nice to see the old wizard in need from time to time. ::hugs:: thanks so much for posting and for using the name. made me smile big time!
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