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Reviews for A Secret Worth Keeping

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  • From WriterLady1031 on March 08, 2004
    Oh I loved this chapter! I liked how you had Dumbledore, the usually kind and benign grandfather-type, getting mad and yelling. That was great and it added something good to the story. Now, I'm curious to see what kind of plans they're going to work out AND what Draco is going to ask Snape about. And what was up with Pomphrey? She seemed to be highly irritated about something.

    Anywho, absolutely fabulous detail in the story and dramatic rise of action. Keep it up!

    Ciao!
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  • From ANON - Estrilda on March 08, 2004
    Great update - I always enjoy stories when Draco and Severus have a close relationship and Draco can push Severus' buttons. I hope this is where you are going. Please update again soon.
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  • From ANON - Imp on March 08, 2004
    I love this story! I read it ages ago when there wasn't nearly as much of it. I'm so glad that Draco is a good guy. Please write more soon. Happy Writing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    PS Your Snape is so sweet!
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  • From ANON - M on March 07, 2004
    Glad for the update but I want more juice. ;-) I know it's coming but I can't wait.
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  • From ANON - jordy on March 07, 2004
    Yeay! An update! I'm very much looking forward to the little conversation to come between Draco and Snape. THAT should be good! And what's up with M. Pomfrey? Are you going to explain that in the next chapter as well? I hope so, because that little snippet with her seeming upset by something has me VERY curious. I was going to comment on something else, but I got sidetracked by my 3 yr old wanting her crayon sharpened. She's got a box of 64 crayons, and all she did was pull all of the red ones out, and just use those. So this big box has all of these nice new crayons with pointy tips and everything, and the red ones are all little stumps. Having a hard time convincing her that it's okay to use other colors...she doesn't seem to agree. When I remember what else I was going to say, I'll update again!

    Oh wait! I remember! I was going to ask if Hermione was goign to be present when the conversation between Draco and Snape was going to happen. If she is, I can't wait for her reaction. And if she isn't I can't wait to find out what her reaction is when she finds out the news of Malfoy knowing! That should be pretty good too...
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  • From ANON - Julie on March 07, 2004
    Wow! This is great...and much better than my obliterate idea. I love the idea that so far only Draco caught onto Sebatians' true parentage. It makes me wonder what he is going to do with this new found knowledge. Can't wait to find out.
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  • From ANON - deblovesdragon on March 07, 2004
    so could they call theves ves da-rat. like "the rat". nevermind, just musing.
    i am glad that draco figured out sebastian's paternity. would have been disappointed in him if he didn't.
    write more soon. please.
    cheers!
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  • From ANON - nesscafe on March 07, 2004
    You're such a sweetie! Thanks for letting me vent and being such a doll about it! Hugs to you!

    LOL! Dumbledore a hippy!?! Hmm... The goofy square glasses, the "twinkle" in his eyes, the long beard and robes... Hmm... Could be!

    OH, loved this chapter! Boy that Draco is a smart one! I still love the R.A.T. idea! I can't wait to see what all happens now that there is a tentative truce going on. Hope the next update comes fast!
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  • From ANON - spaz141 on March 07, 2004
    sometimes that Draco ust ust too smart. what's the bug up Mme Pomphrey(sp) but? very interng sng side to your story, thanks for updating, you know I love the story.
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  • From michelline on March 07, 2004
    Another chapter!! I'm doing the happy dance... Happy Sunday to me! Anyway, Draco is pretty sharp, isn't he? And I think Pansy isn't far behind him. Can't wait for more... And why is Pomfrey irritated?
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  • From ANON - IrishRavenX on March 07, 2004
    *laughs* Draco is a perceptive one...Hermione must be a bit more careful, thought. I was so happy to see the update, I can't wait to see how the two groups will manage to work together without Harry and Draco hexing each other.
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  • From ANON - Deb >^..^< . on March 07, 2004
    Chapter twenty-three: RAT meets DA.... I think that this is a FABULOUS chapter that is the lead in to begin a combined force of R.A.T. & DA!!! I like the way that Albus came in & took care of business!!! I also liked how Hermione got her point across!!! So, what's up with Poppy?!? She really seemed to be a bit pissy!!!

    Draco is one smart little snake!!! I look forward to his conversation with Severus, should be quite interesting!!!

    Can't wait to see these 2 groups combine their forces as well as see more of Severus & hermione building their relationship!!! Til chapter 24, Deb >^..^
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  • From WriterLady1031 on February 25, 2004
    Oh man! That chapter ended way too quickly, but it was good all the same. I am wondering what Draco and Blaise have to say, so it should be interesting. Good story!
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  • From ANON - jordy on February 24, 2004
    First off, I have to say that I just found your story, and read it straight through, so there's lots to comment on. In the beginning, with the screaming baby in the Leaky Cauldron, hit home with me. (Probably one of the reasons I read on...well, besides the fact that I wanted to know Severus' reaction to his newfound son) It brought back many many memories of my 7 year old as a newborn. She had Colic until she was 5 months old, and she screamed CONSTANTLY. I used to call my husband at work in tears, because I was so exhausted and frustrated. The first 5 months of her life I wanted to give her back.
    I love daddy Snape!!! The thought that such a brooding and difficult man can have a soft side, especially to his child, is lovely. And he loves Hermione! He needs some good lovin', doesn't he! Poor, poor, jealous Snape. Or should I be saying poor poor Harry? Not sure with that one. And now, with this new development of R.A.T. I'm very interested to see where that's going! So, the Slytherin bunch, lead by none other than Draco himself, are the good guys too, eh? Very interesting...

    Update soon! I need to know what happens next! *Patiently tapping foot, waiting for more...now pacing...Hurry Up Plea!! j!!
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  • From ANON - PotionsMistressM on February 22, 2004
    I've said it before and I'll say it again: I likes my Draco evil! I hope he comes back to the dark side- oh please! I'll be a good girl! And thanks to you I'm finally allowed outside. In fact 've've left me here. Quite cold-Cleveland in February and all... But nevertheless, thank you. Your story and notes have helped me more than you could know!
    ... Now if I could just find a scarf somewhere...
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