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  • From ANON - LadyBrannon on January 21, 2004
    This is great so far. Nice commentary!
    LB
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  • From ANON - Loraine on January 21, 2004
    Another great chapter baby! The letter is very emotional and powerful. It really conveys the message that the parents disapprove. Very good imagery. I love the description. Keep the chapters coming!


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  • From ANON - spaz141 on January 21, 2004
    Chapter 19 - I think I'm going to be ill (and for once not because of the pregnancy - I think it was your stories that helped with this condition in the first place, btw) the Grangers, ugh, horrible people that was clearly conveyed. Your Severus is very cool. Thanks and loving this story.
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  • From ANON - PotionsMistressM on January 21, 2004
    Oh my God! Poor Hermione! I thought I was a bitch for killing off her parents in my story, but, girl you've definitely got the ways-to-hurt-Hermione title down! Not sure if that's good or bad, but YS eYS emotional reading NEV NEVER get emotional over fanfic. Okay, yes, I get really really angry sometimes...
    But I never get teary! And I definitely did just that with that chapter. I liked the way you brought God into the Grangers' letter. I really don't get how people get so pissy about Harry Potter being the root of all evil and things like that. As far as I'm concerned (and I TEACH Catholocism to grade schoolers), aren't we supposed to believe that "with God all things are possible?" And if so, doesn't that involve witchcraft and magic, which is not even portrayed negatively in the books?
    Okay, hopping off soap box now...
    Very good chapter- well worth the wait! And though I may be driven mad by anticipation, I say take as long as you need to update. like I tell GrrArrg- people will wait for genius. It's the uncomplicated, unmoving stories that get lost in the shuffle! Yours rocks and will forever be on my rec list. Unless you kill Hermione or something. That may be unforgiveable. =)
    Keep up the awesome work!
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  • From ANON - Deb >^..^< . on January 21, 2004
    Chapter Nineteen: False memories and a letter

    One word comes to mind here.... WOW!!! From start to finish, this chapter was AMAZING!!! I LOVE the way that Severus gives her reassurance that she is his & she is loved, though I think it serves him as much as it does her!!!

    YES, you answered my question about the coffins & I don't think you flaked out on why you used coffins at all!!! I think it made perfect sense & did show what pieces of shit her parents were!!! As for your question to me: "Did I go too far?" Not only no, but HELL NO!!! I think you did a fabulous job of showing them as the hypocritical & self righteous people that they are for speaking of God in one breath while throwing away their own child in another!!!

    I am glad that she has Severus & their son, but I think it is so very important that Ron & Harry are being so supportive, she really needs them a lot!!! Of course there is also Albus & Minerva, which rounds out REAL faL family quite nicely!!!

    I LOVE the way you ended it, what Hermione wished for her parents, I wish them the same 1,000 fold!!!

    I am really looking forward to your next update, can't wait for chapter 20!!! Til then, Deb >^..^
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  • From ANON - Alisha on January 20, 2004
    Awww...bless your heart, this chapter is so touching, yet sad at the same time. I look forward to seeing how Harry and Hermione adjust to their so called "marriage" with each other, and how Severus deals with it also. Love this chappie, can't wait till next. :)
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  • From ANON - Susan on January 20, 2004
    OMG...how sad. Her parents, for lack of a better word, suck. I really think that this update was worth waiting for. I truly want Hermione and Severus to be happy. Cripes, I cannot believe what a baby I am for a happy ending! Thanks for updating.
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  • From ANON - nesscafe on January 20, 2004
    What horrible parents! How could they turn their backs on her when she needed them most? I hope you weren't refering to her parents as Christians because a real Christian has the love of God in them and should never disown their child but forgive and guide and love! So sad! But anyway, I look forward to your next chapter.
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  • From ANON - ancientgirl on January 20, 2004
    I'm glad you updated this story. I feel so bad for Hermoine! Her parents are cruel and heartless. I also feel horrible for Severus, he has to stay in the sidelines.
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  • From ANON - Tanya on January 20, 2004
    Oh my gosh! That was a beautiful chapter. Horribly sad, but beautiful. I'm swear I'm about to cry. I do understand, now, mea meaning of the caskets... I just don't understand how any parents could be that evil. It makes me think that they never really loved her in the first place, because if they did, the would have at least heard her out!

    The part after Severus read the letter was so beautiful. He's exactly what she needs right now and I just wish that they could really be together - to the whole world! I wish that Severus didn't have to pretend to be the hating bastard to her and that Harry didn't have to pretend to be Sebastian's father and married to Hermione! It's not fair! Hermione deserves some happiness after all this pain!

    Sorry, I was rambling! Anyway! That was a GREAT chapter! Please update again soon!

    Tanya~
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  • From ANON - Snapeaholic on January 20, 2004
    This was one of the first stories I read on AFF, and I thought it was fantastic! Please keep updating. It's fascinating and VERY well written. The caskets and explanation of them were a great touch!
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  • From ANON - Deb >^..^< . on January 05, 2004
    That last review was from me, my right finger got ahead of me & clicked send before I was done;-)
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 05, 2004
    Chapter 18........ I am so glad that you have updated this story!!! I like how you are pulling the plan together, Minerva's memories are a nicely added touch!!! I am still very curious about the coffins?!? It was quite a surprise that they found all of her belongings in them!!! I am sure that there is a lot more to the coffins & am sure you will let us know whee tie time is right*
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  • From ANON - spaz141 on January 05, 2004
    When I saw a for real update I almost burst into tears, thanks. I am intrigued by the fake marriage and how that will work as Hermione is starting to open up to Severus. This story is great.
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  • From ANON - tottallylost027955 on January 04, 2004
    i really injoyed reading your story. i was at the edge of my sit. i could not read fast enough. but this story is just begining and i can't wait for the rest. i hope for a happy endding but not with out plenty of trails and objects inthe way. thank you for sharing your imagention with me . linda

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