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Reviews for A Secret Worth Keeping

By : RWHandLoraineProductions
  • From ANON - nesscafe on October 13, 2003
    Oh bless their hearts! So much pain and fear and just all kinds of angsty feelings... On the upside she doesn't blame him and I have to agree w/ her if he wasn't under the curse then he would have been able to think clearer and he wouldn't have raped her. He loves her too much and wanted to protect her. His heart wouldn't have allowed it. Lucius is a masterful liar and torturer. It makes great sence that he would want to punish Severus for getting in his way of taking Hermione for himself. I hope that they are able to find the love and comfort they need in each other. Time and patience I guess... I look forward to the next chapter. This is a wonderful fic that has me addicted to it!
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  • From ANON - Deb>^..^< on October 13, 2003
    This story is FANTASTIC!!! I am so glad that you have updated, this chapter was great, as is the whole story!!! I look forward to seeing what the future chapters hold in store for these 2!!! Deb >^..^
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  • From ANON - JC1207 on October 13, 2003
    Great keep it up! I really like how you thank every one its so sweet! Your writing is lovely, it flows very well which is more than I can say for so many other stories of this nature. Can't wait to see the next chapter
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  • From ANON - Zephyr on October 13, 2003
    OMG a wonderful heart wrenching chapter! I just don't have the words top say how wonderful this chapter was.
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  • From ANON - shemhamforash on October 13, 2003
    Well, you certainly must have relished the agony everyone went through waiting for that chapter...It was well worth the wait though...Surprised though equally please with Sev's candid retelling/confession...personally I don't believe in all this OOC bullshit when exploring Sev's personal life and thoughts..we only really know what JK tells us...the rest is our own interpretation...have taken the liberty of contacting her and demanding that not only does she tell us of his more *cough* personal attributes *cough*, and am currently gathering signitures and ideas from others to back up my application...Have great faith that I will be able to convince her of the "error" of her ways for not exploring this earlier...I am rambling...I know..

    Poor little Sevvie, Red make it Ok...Mione will come back to him....or I shall sic Gollum on evil evil author....

    Not that that is supposed to intimidate you or anything...*big cheesy grin*

    Wanting more, sooner...(shall go back to main page now in deluded belief next chapter will be there already)

    Shem xxx
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  • From ANON - shiv on October 13, 2003
    I was uncertain about this fiction when I started reading it, as it seemed a little too similar to others that I have read, like the Buried Life. But you have put an interesting and different spin on this, and perhaps in Hermione's reaction in this case a more likely response than other fictions. I hardly think that she would hop into bed with her rapist straightaway, be he ever so blameless. And it seems just like Lucius to play that kind of mind game, and a very interesting twist in the plot. I didnt see how you were going to get the story back on track after the previous chapter, but this works very well.

    I look forward to reading the rest of the story.
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  • From ANON - Miss Night on October 10, 2003
    Please please hurry with the next chapter.....I would like it alot if he didn't have to tell her that he raped her with out influence. But of course its your writing, and I think its great! Can't wait to read the next part.
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  • From ANON - otherside on October 08, 2003
    poor severus, hmm raping the women he loved- what a twist i didn't expect him to have such strong feelings for her before the rape, very interesting. at least that explains his immediate daddy!snape acceptence. i was suprised he wasn't snarky at all about the baby. the rape seems a very large obstacle for them to get around, expessially if what lucius said was true about snape acting on his own. can't wait to see!
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  • From ANON - Ratty on October 07, 2003
    I love the story are you writing another chapter. I hope you are because I would love to find out what happens.

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  • From ANON - ldf on October 06, 2003
    i read the newest post last night, but i was so bloody brain dead when i did so, i forgot to leave a note and didn't realized it until i was nearly asleep. so here goes.....

    oh, you are SO cruel! first, for the cliffie...... evil, yet again. second, for how horrid the Master was treated.
    please allow him to properly thrash malfoy! better yet, allow me! PLEASE?

    ok, i'm better now.... no really, i am....

    at any rate, i think it was well written. i can only hope that the two of them can forgive themselves for what has happened, as it's still not entirely all within their control.
    heat of the moment and all..... no, i will not blame the Master for the entire mess.....

    love you, darling!

    ~huhs~

    ~blessings~
    ldf
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  • From ANON - alison of the faeries on October 05, 2003
    Such a well-planned story! I can't wait for more.
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  • From ANON - Alex on October 05, 2003
    Okay, I have a beef with the terminology you're using in this story. You forgot to convert all the "Mommy"'s to "Mummy"s. People in England do not SAY "Mommy". Its always "Mummy" or "Mum". CAn you please ammend this? Its rather annoying because I'm sure that you know this information but I can't figure out why you didn't apply it to the story. The story's great otherwise, don't get me wrong, but can you please fix this?
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  • From ANON - Catherine on October 05, 2003
    Woah that was sooo good. Loved it honey. Keep going u must soon!!!! I cant wait to see Sev's reaction...hes soo yummy:P Ne way keep going my love...i love your story...

    Cat
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  • From slygriff21 on October 04, 2003
    This is a great story! Please update soon! So Hermione had his memories in her mind? Severus loes her? Please tell me that Lucious gets what he deserves! That...that...OH! He better get what he deserves! Update and soon!
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  • From ANON - Seraphina on October 04, 2003
    That was simply wonderful, painful, but compelling, and the revelation at the end was breathtaking. I just love how you are developing telatelationship in this story and I can't wait to see what you reveal to us next.
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