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Reviews for The Forbidden Affair

By : Zoe
  • From ANON - sev\'s lover on August 05, 2003
    I like it. Cute so far, but... you need a beta. You put commas in odd places and there's a few grammatical mistakes. And while it isn't that big a problem, they sound a bit American. Please don't take this the wrong way- it isn't intended as a flame, just advice to get somebody to give it a look and polish up any little problems with it.
    Having said all that- more, please?
    ~sev's lover
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  • From ANON - Francy on August 05, 2003
    This has heaps of potential - really interesting so far. Its refreshing - having the characters partnered up with different people - Isabella with Lucius instead of
    Narcissa, for example! definitly continue!
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  • From ANON - Leigh on August 04, 2003
    wow... what an excellent piece of work!!! PLEASE continue! The 'mysterious lady' was Hermione right? What dooes she have to do with the part at the beginning?!!? Or was that Isabella?!? AHH... i have to know! hehe... you've done an excellent job so far... please continue this! (and your other story too... i'm hooked on that as well) =)
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  • From ANON - Katharina on August 03, 2003
    HI!!!!!!!! I went on vacation for a few days without my PC. This was great!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (Okay, so I'm using a lot of f*****g !'s.) Please keep working on it. I have a ton of work to catch up on, but I promise to e-mail you later, 'kay?
    ~Kate!!!~
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  • From ANON - dellessa on August 02, 2003
    Definately worth continuing. ^-^

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  • From ANON - Paprika on August 02, 2003
    This is a such a unteresting story, please update soon!
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  • From ANON - Rilla on August 02, 2003
    This is fabulous! Please continue!!
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