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Reviews for A Day in the Life of a Houseslave

By : HerverusGrape
  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on April 15, 2008
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - Sea on October 17, 2005
    Scary stuff..how horrible to have one's memories taken against one's will. I like the way you have written the character of Snape - never sure if he is evil or good. Looking forward to reading more!
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 10, 2005
    Awomse PLEASE continue u on with this sooooooon!
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  • From filthkitten on August 22, 2003
    I like it! Snape is evil and naughty as always, and this mysterious Madeleine is writ better than I've seen in a while - not quite the wide-eyed virgin, not quite the shameless harlot (heehee, harlot. I love that word!). Yes. I like it. But there is one thing that I can never get enough of - porn! C'mon girl! This is a naughty, naughty forum! Be more sexplicit! Pleeeeease? Hey, it hath already been proven that you can write ungodly well - now spread that talent (and someone's legs?)!

    - 'Da Kitten
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  • From ANON - nesscafe on August 13, 2003
    COOL!!! I can't wait for the expansion on this story! I thought it was great and I have no doubt that you will do a fabulous job w/ it! Write on!
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  • From ANON - Derr on August 04, 2003
    Has definite potenial.
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  • From ANON - stefrand on August 04, 2003
    I really enjoyed your piece. It was well thought out, and quite well wri. Y. Your characters are solid, and the details are fascinating. I actually enjoy the evil!Severus stories very much.....one can take only so much sappy sweetness, after all. Yours is one of the best I've read in a long time. If you decide to expand this fic, I'll definitely be one of the readers!
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  • From EVegvary on August 04, 2003
    This is phenomenally well written and stylishly presented. *clapping* I certainly understand your dilemma of being forced to write something like this...methinks, I can summon acuracurate picture of your own master/muse...hahaha. It does work as a wonderful and extremely chilling stand-alone, but I will continue to check in to see if your, erm, muse forces your hand back to the keyboard for more of this unsettling tale.

    Be well.

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  • From ANON - Lucky on August 04, 2003
    I feel so bad for Hermione! I would definitely write more because it is too good not to. I would love to see Hermione (Flame/Ginny as well) find out everything. She is clever and has access to truth serums. She would eventually figure something out. Great job!
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  • From ANON - Little Miss Cant Be Wrong on August 04, 2003
    Wonderful! Please, please, please turn this into a "full" story, your such a talanted writer that I want to know w you you will go with this.
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  • From ANON - Laerai on August 04, 2003
    Wherever this plot bunny came from, I like it! I love the way you leisurely and prettbtlybtly let the reader figure out the true identity of the characters. eemseems that it could develop into more. If you continue, or leave it be, I still loved it!
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  • From ANON - Pearle on August 03, 2003
    Wow. Very well written. This could stand alone, but with such an intriguing beginning, I would hope you will continue. While I am all for the light to win, there is something to be said for the dark! Great characterizations, I tend to think Snape will react this way, whoever wins. Please continue.
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  • From ANON - Rilla on August 03, 2003
    This is extremely well-written. I usually don't like evil Snape, but I loved this one! It reminded me a bit of one of my favorite books of all time, 'The Handmaid's Tale' by Margaret Atwood. Ooh, this story gave me chills. Great job!
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