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By : soverysita
  • From ANON - Rei on November 10, 2003
    I'm sorry that you were not welcomed here. Good luck at l&lsnape.com
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  • From ANON - Aoibheann on November 10, 2003
    Now, I wish I could edit reviews, because the beginning of mine sounded far more harsh than I intended. What I was trying to say is screw the people that had an issue with your edits, grow your skin thicker against their barbs, and get on with the story. I don't want to go somewhere else to read it, I want to read it here, dammit!!!
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  • From ANON - Aoibheann on November 10, 2003
    So that's it? Two negative reviews and you turn tail and leave the story half finished? Writing is hard. And reviews are tough. You need to get a thicker skin. Perhaps when you edited your fic, you could have put in the story information that it wasn't updateust ust edited, that way no one would have gotten bent out of shape (ridiculously so, I might add) by your attempt to better your fiction through editing. Hey, I had to edit my fic twice because I inadvertently made Severus a female through a misplaced pronoun AND screwed up the timeline, making each chapter a YEAR apart instead of a few hours. Mistakes happen, edits are necessary. Other people need to get over it, not you. Out of all your reviews, only two seemed negative, and even one of those had a positive buried inside. Perhaps you should rethink before committing the fanfic equivalent of boardicide.

    ~Pa
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  • From ANON - Sara on November 10, 2003
    As much as I agree with you. That some peaple who say mean things to writers is very dishearting becase if the writer what to become a book writer how can they if they keep on getting people who writes flames and not leaving emails. like you said its a very cowardly thing to do and if the people are reading this review. I say you are assholes for writers like this probaby give you a or or something to look forward to. But that is all i have to say to you. TO the ather I hope you keep on writeing i have like your fanfictions so keep on going and if there are more people who flame you say to tham if they do not like your story than tell them to go somewhere else.
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  • From ANON - nesscafe on November 10, 2003
    Don't let some smart aleck remarks scare you away! You're writing is good! You should stay! Those boogers should get a clue! Really!!! Don't let a few bad apples spoil it for the rest of us! PPPPLLLLEEEEAAASSSEEE!!!! *begs w/ puppy dog eyes* Even Snapesflower and Rilla get nasty jerks emailing them and reviewing like that and they are like the goddesses of HG/SS! Don't leave, love! Anyone w/ half a brain could tell that you were editing and not posting new chapters! The update date changes when you actually post a new chapter as opposed to the same date being there when you edit! Also the number of chapters is the same! Get a clue peopel! God some folks just aren't happy unless they are bitching or stepping on other people's toes! Hello people! Leave the writer alone! If she wants to bump her story every hour she's got that right! See that long bar on the side of your browser? Well use it and get off sita's back! INGRATES!!! They can just get over it! :cP You stay! I'll protect you!


    Hugs,
    Ness
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  • From ANON - Rhynn on November 10, 2003
    soverysita,
    I am very disappointed to hear that wontwont be continuing your story on this site. A friend of mine introduced me, and your fic was actually the first one I opened. I've been addicted ever since, and checking daily for updates. Please add me to your list so I can continue to enjoy your story, and for those blockheaded, narrow-minded twads who complained because you were improving your writing skills through editing past work, if they dont like what you're doing, they dont have to read your work. And it's obvious from their complaints that they are either not writers at all, or writers who get jealous because they think you're stealing their spotlight. (which, after their behavior, I certainly hope you are).

    If you're too much of a coward to tell someone your name, you dont belong on this site.

    ...And just incase mine doesnt show up, I'll apologize now, and try to figure out what's wrong with my computer again.

    ~Rhynn
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  • From Semidazed on November 10, 2003
    I'll admit, I am also a victim of tweaking the story after the initial post. Since you seem to be getting a lot of reviews complaining about moving it back up to the top (and it's because you're actually just editing it) you may want to put a little note in the header that you are just editing. It helps me avoid those reviews. ;) BTW- I really like your story.
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  • From ANON - Deb >^..^< on November 10, 2003
    Sita, I am so sorryt that this has happened!!! Please know that I will be checking for your story at the Lord & Lady Snape site as I am very much enjoying it!!! Please keep me on your email list because I really want to keep up with this story!!!
    Deb >^..^
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  • From ANON - deblovesdragon on November 10, 2003
    Sita,
    Sorry that some bad apples had to ruin it for you and the rest of us. My personal philosophy is that if I don't have anything nice ty, Iy, I don't review. I really liked your fic. I hope that you feel like continuing it soon.
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  • From ANON - snape\'s dark haired girl on November 10, 2003
    I really enjoy your story! Will you please post an update soon?
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  • From ANON - snape\'s dark haired girl on November 10, 2003
    I really enoy your story! Will you please post an update soon?
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  • From ANON - Somebody on November 07, 2003
    Okay! We get the damn point... you want people to read your work! This is a good story but for the love of GOD please stop moving it to the top, it is incredibly obnoxious!
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  • From ANON - GlindaTrisstt on November 06, 2003
    As flattered as I am by your praise of 'Charming a Phoenix', I have to say ...

    GET BUSY MISSY !! This story is far too interesting to let lie.

    I'm looking forward to reading more.

    Glinda
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  • From ANON - Ki\'ela on November 05, 2003
    AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!! YOU CAN'T END IT THERE!!! YOU CAN'T!!! MOOOOOOOOOOOOOOORE!!!! WE NEED MORE!! WRITE WRITE WRITE!!!! MOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOORE!!!!!! *gasps for breath*


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  • From ANON - anon on November 05, 2003
    Your fic is interesting and I'm eagerly awaiting more. The fact that you keep bumping it up to the top is most annoying. I can only assume that you are looking for reviews. The best way to do this is to update. Please cease with the incessant bumping unless you are going to update. This will only cause you to lose readers.
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