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Reviews for Beneath

By : soverysita
  • From ANON - Talene on November 05, 2003
    Girl...come on! Everytime I see this story updated I think...."Yes! Another chapter!" Only...guess what? No new chapters. Please....update with new chapters soon! Ok? Please....I'm on bended knee begging you plaintively! Pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeze!
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  • From ANON - Titania on November 03, 2003
    Just read Beneath and really liked it! Well done! But I have an ulterior reason for the review. I read that you live in New Orleans, well that is where I grew up too. I did my people watching from balconies and the Cafe DuMonde. Jazz Fest is by far the penultimate in people watching locations, however. I live in Houston now, and miss those beingets soooo much! And -oh God-i cannot seem to find Blue Plate mayo, or Blue Runner red beans ANYWHERE!!! Ahhh Central Grocery and Pat O's. Pecan Pie a la Mode at the Camellia Grill. Well, I know who's going to be making a road trip very soon.
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  • From ANON - shaolin on November 03, 2003
    Oh wow!! I bit my nails all through this one.
    GRRRR! Please write faster, then i can have a
    good reason to chew the nails on my other hand!
    Great fic...i'll be waiting!!!
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  • From ANON - Helena on November 02, 2003
    Good God!!!
    This chapter was breathtaking!!!!!!!!!!Jesus Christ, now this is what I call an outstanding job!!
    Girl, you have in me a loyal fan! keep the terrific work!!
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  • From ANON - kirien on November 02, 2003
    *dry mouthed* you've managed to make the Good Ship Prudence n' Potions even more /incendiary/ than it already is. the dark erotic tension here is excruciatingly thick--damn! it's just like Heathcliff and Cathy, but blunt and graphic modern-style. blown away here. more, more, more!!
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  • From ANON - Red Writing Hood on November 02, 2003
    Ohhh...HOT! I love it...I was a bit confused at first on this chapter. I wasnt sure if it was a dream sequence or not. I love the story so far.

    Red
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  • From ANON - Smut Slut on November 02, 2003
    AAAARRRRGGGGHHHH!!!! WRITE ANOTHER CHAPTER NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOW!!!

    Very good so far, Draco needs a little lesson *rubs hands gleefully, looking particularly evil as she brings out the Uzi that shoots pies*

    SS
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  • From lilyadar on November 02, 2003
    Very powerful and visual. I can literally see everything happening before me when reading 'Beneath'. This is truly one of the most interesting Snape/Hermione fics I've read in quite a while.
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  • From ANON - Corazon on November 01, 2003
    OMG! I can't believe I haven't read
    this sooner! ase ase update soon!

    Your smut scene and the wand - wow!
    All I can think of at the moment is
    WOW!

    Hugs,
    Corazon
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  • From ANON - AlphaRyoko on November 01, 2003
    Oh. My. Goodness. Where do I begin?

    This story is just captivating. It draws the reader into an emotional wringer ... one of the better Snape characterizations that I've seen. You've nailed his narrative voice (quite admirably for a third-person, I might add!), it's dominating, visceral, exhausting ... the reader can sense his desperation, his despair, his all-consuming desire for Hermione. I feel like I need a shower every time I re-read it!

    This is one hell of a ride, that's for sure. Now, after six chapters, where are we going?

    (here's where I make a whining fangirl fool of myself and beg for updates.)
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  • From ArachneNonafel on November 01, 2003
    I am a little confused. While I enjoyed the love scene immencely....how did we get from Sev wanting to resign to that? If it were Herm's dream then perhaps there should be a little break there? Maybe some ****'s? Just a little suggestion. Please take no offence. If I simply misunderstood then I apologise. Great story though and I am enjoying it soooo very much and wish you would possibly update sooner? hehe
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  • From ANON - Rilla on November 01, 2003
    This is so intensely emotional. Wow.
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  • From ANON - Deb >^..^< on November 01, 2003
    This was SOMETHING!!! Where is Severus going & why? I would think he would want to rip Malfoy apart, not run away!!! Who's fabulously smut filled dream are they sharing, his or her's? This chapter just makes me want more, more, MORE!!! Will be watching for your next update*
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  • From ANON - crissy on November 01, 2003
    this fic i gre great! severus' thoughts are so smutty. you'd think he was some horny teenager. i want to read more.
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  • From ANON - Goblynn on November 01, 2003
    Please update soon! This is an excellent little tale. I was looking for something to satisfy a little itch--this was my answer. Terrific. :-)
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