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Reviews for The Potions Mistress

By : MikhailovRose
  • From EVegvary on October 21, 2003
    You just keep layering and layering onto this story. It is very intriguing. It's nice to see a young Severus with so much hope for the future yet so much faith in the present.

    I am so anxious to see how a relationship develops between these two darkly mysterious characters.

    Keep going!
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  • From EVegvary on October 21, 2003
    This is incredibly strong. You are really setting the reader up for a long fic with all the information, asides, innuendos, mysteries and strong characters in this chapter. Will it be long??? I do hope so. I love your teenage Snape, just love him. He's got so much potential.

    The dialgue is strong, your scenes well described and played out. I want to know more about Theda!
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  • From ANON - rickfan37 on September 23, 2003
    I'm really enjoying this story. It's nice to see Severus characterised in this way, still a loner but before the death eater years make him bitter and tortured. Theda is a nice character too, and I like the way their relationship is develpoing. And it makes a refreshing change to have the student/teacher story turned on its head!
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  • From EVegvary on August 23, 2003
    I think your story is very, very interesting. I can't remember seeing this premise anywhere else in the HPVerse, so good onya for coming up with something original. You have a great command of dialogue and very strong visuals.

    I think your story would be easier to read if it were formatted with breaks between paragraphs and/or dialogue.

    You've certainly captured my interest and I will check back for your updates. Keep writing!

    Be well,
    Elizabeth
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