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Reviews for Tension and Fate

By : Nifty225

From ANON - MadAboutHarry on December 22, 2003
Well, those aren't the pairings that I usually follow, but this was very well done and quite enjoyable, in a squirmy kind of way. Please continue.
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From ANON - nikki on August 01, 2004
pls pls pls write another chappy.
very cool story
write more please
love it

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From ANON - strange_pepoles on July 18, 2004
Good! Good! Continue, just go through the book with changes two acomidate the relationships. my complements.
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From ANON - H/G Fan on May 22, 2004
OMG!! What a combination! My two fav couples in one. And what a great contrast between the raw lust and passion of Ron and Hermione and the sweet and sexy encounter between Harry and Ginny. More.... PLEASE!!!
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From ANON - heyo on January 07, 2004
very well done, love to see another chapter....
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From ANON - dutchie on January 05, 2004
Very nice story. Hopefully, this story will be continued as it has gone off to a good start. For a suggestion for the next chapeter, I suggest firstly, the aftermath of the first night and then of course Ginny and Ron should return the fvaour that Harry and Hermione bestowed on them.
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From ANON - insanity on December 18, 2003
Next chapter, suggestions...

Ron and Hermione and Harry!
Ginny, Hermione and Harry!

Or just more Ron action of any sort, or we could get the twins involved... Some Fred/Hermione or George/Harry... or something. I have no idea. I'm jupoutpouting off ideas.

If all else fails, just have them experiment more. I'd read it. :)
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From ANON - Phoenix on December 17, 2003
ME LIKEY!!!!!!!!!! Very good. i enjoyed readin' that. please post another chappie soon.
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From ANON - kk on October 28, 2003
Sweet story, and yleaslease please please continue.
I REEEEAAAALLLYYYY want a second chapter.
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From ANON - Eric Cartman (day dreaming as Hitler) on September 03, 2003
Schnell ach. Lovental bros lieben. And I menschen vergen broder. Doktor Schtalin? Alarm! Menchoss? Zellan vei zamboa- Lueden est verboten, a den ascriber utz, kapieda hockuh, wite more, God dammit!
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From ANON - TKiwi on August 30, 2003
wow! that was great! but what about the next morning? what'll happen???! O.o please make this longer- pwease?!!
-Kiwi
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From ANON - HPfreak18 on August 09, 2003
You should continue as soon as possible, this was good and I think you should continue this with an after math or something, I llove these pairings and want more!
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From ANON - Anon on August 09, 2003
Yay! Let's just IGNORE canon completely!
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From ANON - BladeCelebare on August 09, 2003
Hmm, interesting... three different ways of coming to climax without actual penetration ;) Intreguing, and fairly well-written.
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