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Reviews for Tension and Fate

By : Nifty225
  • From Pegleg-TinStar on February 02, 2021

    The setup is a little vague and awkward, but this story wasn’t about moving any HP plots or AUs forward.  This was about moving the sexual exploration of  typical teens (even wizard teens) forward, and is very well written.


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  • From Pegleg-TinStar on August 01, 2020

    A good start to ‘shipping’ Ron & Hermione, as well as Harty and Ginny.  Not everyone likes JKR’s pairings, but they work for me.  I always thought the HG pairing was inevitable: Lily Potter had red hair, so does Ginny; Ginerva is a variant of Guinevere, and Harry might be a variant of Arthur; Harry never had a real family, and the Weasleys practically adopted him, marrying Ginny makes him part of the only real family he’s ever known; Garry may have money, but he was deprived and raised as if he were poor, he doesn’t look down on the Weasleys because they’re not rich, in fact he admires how they all look out for each other; Harry somehow managed to save Ginny’s life, Arthur’s life, and maybe Eon’s, too.  To put it simply, Ginny represents everything good that was missing from Harry’s life before he went to Hogwarts or met the Weasleys.  Of course he fell for her!  Well written, a few typos slipped through the editing, but keep at it, there is potential here!


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  • From Pegleg-TinStar on August 01, 2020

    A good start to ‘shipping’ Ron & Hermione, as well as Harty and Ginny.  Not everyone likes JKR’s pairings, but they work for me.  I always thought the HG pairing was inevitable: Lily Potter had red hair, so does Ginny; Ginerva is a variant of Guinevere, and Harry might be a variant of Arthur; Harry never had a real family, and the Weasleys practically adopted him, marrying Ginny makes him part of the only real family he’s ever known; Garry may have money, but he was deprived and raised as if he were poor, he doesn’t look down on the Weasleys because they’re not rich, in fact he admires how they all look 


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  • From Pegleg-TinStar on July 30, 2020

    If you're going to 'ship' H/G and R/H, this is a great way to picture the start of things.  Good images, and true to the characters of all four of them.  My pet peeve is poor editing.  There were way to many typos in the story; it wasn't too hard to figure out what was meant by the author, but it does ruin the flow of things for the reader when they have to stop and go "what did he/she mean by that?"  

    Don't let that stop you!  I think the author has some chops and is capable of more!

     


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  • From ANON - LuvsHarrynGin on November 30, 2013
    Loved it until the glass jar. You lost me there. Yuck!!! But really good and I'd love to see a second chapter (minus the jar). Lol
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  • From paul120 on July 13, 2007
    looking for per hogworts or 1st year harry/ginny
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  • From ANON - rustymotion on November 07, 2005
    great start, i would love to see this continued.. fluffelicious
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  • From ANON - Ero-Bontenmaru on October 09, 2005
    I liked it. Very Tender. I just wish you had put a bit more smut.
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 19, 2005
    Brilliant. Confident Hermionie was spot-on.
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  • From ANON - lansiar on July 17, 2005
    great story and ties in even better now that HBP confirms these pairings.
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  • From ANON - Sarah on July 17, 2005
    Please please please write more. I thinkthis story is excellent and I would love to read further chapters!
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  • From ANON - Rocky235 on April 17, 2005
    That was a fun story to read. Kind of sweet.
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  • From ANON - Vixen Malfoy on January 03, 2005
    *grin* well usually i'm really not a Hermione/Ron paring kind of person but i love this story! i definately think that you should continue writing, because i NEED to find out what happens next. Love it!
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 21, 2004
    PS: If you're planning to make the next chapter PWP, a Ginny/Hermionie/Harry would be the obvious choice, but somehow I think your story is more than just a simple PWP. Hermionie/Ron and Harry/Ginny seemed to click, so simply keeping the existing relationships, and exploring how they explain what happened in the morning, and if they tell each other or keep the relationships a secret, etc etc.

    Oh, and more of Hermionie being a tiger in the bedroom. That was HAWT.
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 21, 2004
    Simply the best Harry Potter lemon I have ever read. You left us hanging, though. PLEASE continue the story - Hermionie was damn sexy in that chapter.
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