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By : shelia
  • From ANON - crissy on November 05, 2003
    this fic is so overwhelmiits its crazy. and so long. and so scary. i have to read bits at a time. but i kcomicoming back. you have a great writing style and the plot is great. scary but it draws the reader in. i want to know if heermione will fight back herself or if it will be severus who saves her. will she have her chance to kill lucius yet?
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  • From ANON - Mary on November 04, 2003
    You've done it again! *grin* Another brilliant chapter. Your attention to detail is simply mind-blowing especially all your A/Ns at the end of chapters. I simply love the depth you have created for Sev & Hermione's characters. Don't let Harry's heart get broken though. Sweet caring honourable boy v/s dark brooding troubled complex Sev. Hmm... I know who I'd tanydanyday... Go you good thing Sev!! You need some joy! This is by far my most favourite fic and as much as it feels like the end is nigh, I wish this story would keep going forever!! Given your amazing, inspired imagination, I'm pretty sure you could do it too!

    Hugs & Godspeed
    M
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  • From ANON - Deb>^..^< on November 04, 2003
    I Have been reading this story for a whilI doI don't bekieve that I've left a review, for that I am sorry!!! I try to make the author aware that their work is appreciated & this is a story that I have become caught up in!!! Your work, for al the the darkness & sadness has been exceptional, well written & honest!!! You have made the situation & the characters very real which shows pure talent!!! I am so impressed by your portrayal of Severus, of all of the characters in truth!!! With chapter 22 you have given us a new insight to the many sides of Severus.... LOVE!!! You gave tiny bits of hints along the way, just enough to make him stating it believable, but not so many clues that it didn't give the statement the surprise & power it deserved!!! I will be watching for chapter 23 as I feel a great need to know what will happen to Severus & Hermione at Lucius' party & if they live, what will happen to them beyond!!! Deb >^..^
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  • From ANON - Rilla on November 04, 2003
    You have me all tied up in knots again reading this. I can hardly wait for the next update.
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  • From ANON - Fish on October 26, 2003
    awwww... sevvie-kins - typically h

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    i love this fic... it's so dark, but with the light showing through at times...

    loving it! more soon, please!

    ciao
    Fish
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  • From ANON - SillyLily on October 25, 2003
    Wonderful!! Please update again soon!!
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  • From ANON - Introspect on October 25, 2003
    You know, your story was the first Harry Potter fanfic I ever read...it iduceduced me to a world that I have since become so immerced in, I cannot live without. Your story has inspired me to write my own, and I look forward to your updates. That being said, I also wanted to say that this chapter has made me love your story all the more...not only the tenderness and trust you portray between Hermione and Snape, but I am a huge H/Hr shipper, and the kiss at the end almost made me cry. I love your story...I can't wait to see more of it in the future.
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  • From ANON - GlindaTrisstt on October 24, 2003
    Oh I was so, so happy the see a new chapter for this story. it has been like a guilty pleasure for me. This has turned out to be one of the best stories on the site. That is why I listed it in my recomended readings !!

    Can't wait for the next chapter. Is Harry considered equal footing ??

    Glinda
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  • From ANON - GrrArrg on October 24, 2003
    Hurrah!

    You're back, and better I hope?
    Fantasic chapter
    More soon plz
    kisses

    GrrArrg
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  • From ANON - Deb >^..^< on October 24, 2003
    This story is AMAZING!!! I just sat & cried through parts of it, no one should have to suffer such things!!! I am hoping that you wil be updating soon. Deb >^..^
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  • From ANON - Mary on October 23, 2003
    Ooh goody! I love it when I see an update from you. I found this DG first and then when I re-found it on AFF I found all your other stories too. Great stuff. I'm really impressed with your writing. Well thought out and not just fluff. So addicted and impatient for updates that I had to read a whole heap of your recommended stories too. I'm really quite obsessed!! I'm glad I found your dark and angsty stuff first because it made the PWP stuff even more amusing. I reallyoyedoyed HMC (when are you updating again??) and D&D. You have an amazing imagination for the types of stories you come up with. Once again - very impressed. Keep those updates coming. Interesting to see in DG where HG/HP leads to. Not one of the pairings I have read much about in yours or your recommended stories. Hmmm..

    Hugs & inspiration and glad to hear you're well.
    M
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  • From ANON - nesscafe on October 23, 2003
    Percy Weasley is a more traitorous rat fink then Wormtail was! Ugh!!! I hope he gets gutted by Snape! Jerk attacked his own sister!

    You are killing me w/ the Hermione/Severus angst! I totally understand why things are the way they are, but I just feel so sad for them! I want him to make love to her and I want her to find comfort and kindness in him! *sigh* I knt'st's just a story, but reallly it's so good my own heart just breaks for them!

    Aw!!!! Their noses bumped! That's so cute! She's kissed Harry! I wonder if this will help her any and what Snape will think if he finds out.

    I hope you don't have to as as long for the next chapter! Update soon! I love you work!

    Hugs,
    Ness
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  • From ANON - Sarah on October 17, 2003
    Hi i really like your story but WILL YOU PLEASE UPDATE IT SOON i keep checking but its never updated:{
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  • From ANON - Mary on October 14, 2003
    Andrian, you bugger! You have been updating here and not updating on The Dark Arts site. I was wondering why there had been nothing for a month then lo - I find this site. More's the better after all. Great work and keep it coming.
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  • From ANON - Flick on October 13, 2003
    This is an amazing fic. I love it. Keep updating
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