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By : shelia
  • From ANON - GrrArrg on August 21, 2003
    Oh poor Sev!!

    When is he going to unleash that power, kill the bastards and save Hermione or is that just my wishful thinking!!

    More soon plz

    GrrArrg
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  • From ANON - GrrArrg on August 19, 2003
    Ooh this ettietting very interesting

    I love the way this story is going, and the way you descibed Severus through Dumbledore's eyes was beautiful.

    Can't wait for more of this, and your other works in progress!!

    GrrArrg
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  • From ANON - dianna on August 17, 2003
    this is such a good fan fiction. can you please e mail me when you have updated it(girlygirlboxer@cs.com) Is this a HG & SS stroy??
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  • From ANON - Zephyr on August 17, 2003
    Great chapter! Please please please update agin soon. Good to see that Draco Malfoy is getting what he deserves!
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  • From ANON - GrrArrg on August 16, 2003
    Ha Hafoy foy can't get it up!!

    Good, I hope that little son of a bitch gets exactly whats coming to him!! and his bastard father!

    Sorry, I get a bit emotional when it comes to Hermione,she is one of my favourite characters.

    It must be hard for you to write such a strong character so broken, but i have faith that Severus will pull her through, although at what price to himself?

    Knowing you it will be riveting reading whatever happens.

    GrrArrg
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  • From ANON - GrrArrg on August 16, 2003
    Heartbreaking and sensitivly written.

    I think this is going to be an amazing story.

    I can't wait for more

    GrrArrg
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  • From ANON - SnarkySnape on August 15, 2003
    WOW. i've never read anything like this. it's really dark, and i'm normally the fluff type, but i still like it. i'm so concerned for hermione!!! i hope she's going to be alright, and i love the protective!Snape. please update soon!!!
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  • From ANON - Odessa on August 15, 2003
    Just finished reading chapter 2; damn that gives me the chills. I couldn't live a double life like that. It is a wonder that Snape's not insane.
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  • From ANON - Linis on August 14, 2003
    This is very emotional and very traumatic. To approach a subject like and keep it in the view is amazing... you have written it well and I do hope you continue.

    LINIS
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  • From ANON - nesscafe on August 13, 2003
    I have already read what you have written on Fanfiction.net, but I wanted to encourage you to keep posting and updating! I am rereading here as you update and reading updates there! Can you tell I love this story? Keep writing! I love your work!
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  • From ANON - Emu on August 13, 2003
    Bloody brilliant! Honestly greatest story ever written, (Well all your stories are great) please update soon. I am sitting on the edge of my seat for the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Hurricane on August 13, 2003
    Aaaaah, it was both Lucius AND Draco abusing her! Well, you have done it again in this
    chapter, you have left me shocked, saddened, angry and definitely wanting more. I have
    a million questions about what will happen next, but instead of taking up space with my
    own curiosity, I will just wait patiently for your next update. However, I am not above
    begging, so....please, please, please, keep writing this story. You a gre great writer with a
    knack for describing characters emotions. Several times throughout in this chapter (4) I
    felt Snape?s rage, Albus? disgust and Minerva?s empathy. The smaller details are what
    brought the story to life and gave each character emotion. The following paragraph, is an
    excet ext example of your use of detail to give characters emotion.

    ?Severus stop this,? Minerva said her voice trembling. Severus glanced over at the older
    couple to see Albus stroking her hair as she buried her face in his shoulder. Albus looked
    at him fire blazing in the blue eyes. ?We need to continue Minerva, we must know.?
    Severus nodded, feeling sick and turned back to Hermione. ?Continue please Miss Granger.?

    This paragraph did not just offer dialogue between characters, it included gestures, which
    brought each character to life and offered them a human side that the readers could
    identify with. One gesture that particularly struck me is the part where Severus sees
    Albus stroking Minerva hair. This sign of affection was easy to imagine the character
    doing, and was well placed in the story in relation to Hermione?s description of events.


    Well, I guess I have done enough rambling. I hope to see an update soon. Once again, great job.



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  • From ANON - Zephyr on August 12, 2003
    I like your writing style.. I can't wait till you update this story again!
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  • From ANON - Yawning (not logged in) on August 12, 2003
    Ah, here I was thinking it was Malfoy Jr. not Sr. What a surprise?! Great story and I'm addicted to it already.
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  • From ANON - Karena Elizabeth on August 12, 2003
    Oh my! This is a great story!onlyonly have one question... why would they remove the Grangers memories instead of telling them something was wrong with their daughter? Anyway, GREAT STORY! I'm enjoying it very much. Please Update soon

    KE
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