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Reviews for Poison

By : Ally
  • From ANON - Anon on November 27, 2005
    Wow... powerful
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  • From ANON - Bella the Dark on August 24, 2003
    OMFG

    That was one of the most beautiful bit of fic I think I'v ever had the privilege to read. I truly enjoyed it. Thanks!




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  • From ANON - Anon on August 22, 2003
    Good LORD, woman! This was delicious! The first-person Severus was a damned good idea - and the naughty, naughty Harry! MIGOD! Yummy. Ice creamy delish. Write more! Very firey!

    - 'Da Kitten
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  • From ANON - diagonalist on August 16, 2003
    As you well know I don't like song fics, or rather I just dont read the lyrics and skip straight to the good stuff. That probably means that I didn't get half of the intended impact of this, but what I did read knocked my socks off *checks, and sure enough isn't wearing socks anymore*

    The strongest point in this was obviously the smut; it really stood out because you brought their emotions into it so well. Everything that they did together wasn't so much about sex as about expressing other things, and I think that worked really well.

    I have a thing for mental illness stories (read: crazy people like me) and thought that your portrayal of Harry was so good it was seriously disturbing. Having to face up to that level of abuse would be horrifying, and you are one of the only people I know who didn't make him recover after a couple of days and some hugs. Thank you for that.

    On the other hand, I do require eventual fluff to make up for the angst, and though the fact he did eventually call Severus' name was satisfying, I would like him to recover somewhat and acknowledge what's going on in the sequel *plugs for sequel*

    Am totally happy now that I've had my smut fest for the day. Yeppers. Love you, keep going.
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  • From ANON - chantalmalfoy on August 12, 2003
    Wow... that was sad...
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  • From ANON - TKiwi on August 12, 2003
    damn, that was, well, DAMN! did you get the song idea from one of the HP (Sev/Luc/Gild) music vids out there?not not i have the link and you can check it out... this was great, i hope you're gonna do a follow up..? yes? if not, that was still a good ending- it just leaves alot unsaid and done! *shrugs* please write another!!! this is going on my recs list!
    ciao!
    -TKiwi
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  • From ANON - Shei on August 12, 2003
    Ally darling, you already know I love this and that you are a smut godess so I won't bother repeating myself saying how hot and kinky and perfect it was so here you are: ggggggggggggggggggggg gggggggggggggggggggggggggggg ggggggggggggggggggggggggg gggggggggggggggggggggggggggg ggggggggggggggggggggggggggg gggggggggggggggggg gggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggg ggggggggggggggggggggggggggggg ggggggggggggggggggg
    You made me drool: More than once and you know I read too much smut for my own good so me drolling is g cog compliment.
    Shei
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